Chapter 2: woah, I've just began reading this and the super fine recipes at the end are a super cute idea! maybe I'll try them out, one day or another. Up until now, this story is delicious, fergalicious, bootylicious, and now I'm going to stop this weird list of resembling words coz what
Chapter 9: Saw this.
Clicked on a whim.
Breaking into tears.
Thanking the heavens for not slipping this story away.
Thinking back how amazingly awesome it was.
Grinning from all the beautiful characters and plots.
Cooing in astonishment from reading such a spectacular story. With bias Tao's starring in it truly.
I had no words. Just emotions I couldn't express until I got myself back together. Oh how it tugged at my heart strings.
Kaira is very relatable in my per say. I give my full hearted praise to the author of this wonderful story that kept me up evening to dawn.
Thank you. -v-
Chapter 9: This story is tagged as comedy.
But I shed tears while reading.
Strangely I -still- love the story.
Thank you for the tearful comedy. Comedy is never been this painful :') you rock, author-ssi
Chapter 9: it was so great oh my god my heart is happy and sad and my brain wants more, my heart does too. This was the best story- wait that doesn't work. All of your stories are the best stories. I cried so many times and Kiara is so precious and the relationship between Tao and Kris is A+ I love it so much and I NEED MORE I LOVE YOU AUTHOR-NIM
Chapter 9: I cried like twice or thrice because of this story.Its beautiful;-; Like the correct mixture of happiness,sadness and a slice of life to go with;)
Chapter 9: This is classic. Like worth-publishing. Beautifully written. Your descriptions and way of words draw me into this story. It's rare to find stories, more especially fanfictions, in this site with lovely plot and amazing writing skills. You write like a pro. I hope one day I could read a book written by you. :)
Chapter 9: I hope that you'll see this comment. And that maybe it will mean something to you.
You hurt me with your writing. And no, I'm not attacking you. It's not a bad thing but your elegant words touched something raw inside and it /hurts/. I can't say what it is because I honestly don't know, but I went on a journey along with Kris and Tao. I became entangled just like them, I became involved emotionally and perhaps I could relate a little too much. So that's why when it fell apart, when the despair took over and it was hard to see any good on the horizon, I declined too. I didn't want to stop reading but I didn't want you to wound me further. In the end, I finished the story in little more than three days (if I remember correctly).
Your writing did something to me similar to the effect of Tao's cooking. You bring out the memories, painful and beautiful, wanted and unwanted, so vividly that there is no escape. But I will come back and read this again. Maybe the effect will be dulled, maybe it will be heightened. No matter what, I know it will affect me. It's so warm and cathartic and comforting but at the same time it's raw and painful and real. I cannot turn away and I've changed a little from reading this.
Thank you.
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