Great job, you did rewriting the story.. Oooh Baekkie and YooJung, they are so cute together ;) This is going smoothly.. i like it :) It's completely different from your first draft that has been reviewed :) Because I must be honest, I missed Baekhyun in the first version.. As I knew by checking the characters that he also played an important role.. But this I do like a lot! FIGHTING ^^9 DAEBAK!! ^^
Chapter 12: You've changed it alot! But I like the way you did it. It's getting more interresting but don't forget to write details to, or else it will go to fast.. And about the song. Listening while reading. Great choice!
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