Chapter 54: Nice story, thor
It would be greater if you write the story with many pov :)
It will more explain anything because your plot is great :D
Beside, I'm so look for the sequel, I hope it will be complete soon.
Because I more like to read a story after it complete.
Keep writing (งˆ▽ˆ)ง
Chapter 54: Nice story, thor
It would be greater if you write the story with many pov :)
It will more explain anything because your plot is great :D
Beside, I'm so look for the sequel, I hope it will be complete soon.
Because I more like to read a story after it complete.
Keep writing (งˆ▽ˆ)ง
Chapter 53: After I read this over and over again.. I really want a one more chapter again. I mean the sequel is good, but I want a chapter about Baekhyun's feeling and prespertive, he's just so mysterious and it's really hard to guess what's Baek gonna do next. Like for example in chapter where he got beaten up, he's laying in the bed all day long and you didn't tell us (the readers) that his friends told how awesome Hyerim was and his reaction. Also in the end of the story when Hyerim tried to torture Baek, he looked so sad (I really wanna know what's going on in his mind) It's just my suggestion though.. It's okay if you don't want to add some chapter about Baekhyun's side but I'm just suggesting... Hehe><
Hello I am giving this story a chance since I usually don't read exo stories but a friend of mine recommended yours so it'll be nice to experience something new. I hope that you don't mind that I review every few chapters. I look forward to reviewing on chapters I really enjoy.
Chapter 53: After a long long time read a story which i couldn't stop reading.....its sooo well written and every chapter is full of feels
i love how they fall in love slowly and beautifully~~~
thank you for such a beautiful story Author-nim
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