Chapter 28: You know, I actually really enjoyed reading this despite the drama/angst. You're drama was very realistic and it wasn't forced at all, and that's what I like about it. Most people's story drama are very forced and in your face about it, so I tend to find them boring and would stop reading.
TaeNy are very cute and sweet when they started off as friend to best friend. I feel bad for Tae a few times cuz of Tiff and her boyfriend. There are times where I wish you would write where Tiff tries to make it up to Tae a bit more, since Tae was right when she asked "Why didn't you come to me first?" I felt that Tae was very entitled to be mad at Tiff, and that Tiff should have done something to repay Tae's kindness cuz Tae was really cold/bitter towards Tiff and would always give in and forgive the girl.
Overall, I enjoy reading this a lot. Thanks for writing :D
Chapter 28: Reached the end and as expected it did not disappoint. I like the light flow of the story with just the right amount of drama so it will not bore out the reader. Id honestly tell that I might have read a story with this kind of genre but not entirely the same just like twilight and all those vampire type of stories, dont get me wrong Im not comparing. What I wanted to say is regardless of the genre it will always depend on how the author will drop those lines, the timing and how they will do the twist and turn to create their own style and leave a unique impact. Id tell you, you just did. Thank you for a wonderful story. :) youre great that's for sure.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Aww Im soft. As y as I may sound, I dont normally comment at the start of every stories I read cause I mostly do it at the end where I can input my full conclusion base on what the story made me felt but I always have soft spots for these types of stories where the character is like a painting in where people have different views base on their perspective but only the right people who truly appreciate art knows the true meaning beneath the surface, cause I totally can relate. I like this already.
Chapter 28: awwww~ I really liked your story, especially Jessica's caring personality through all your story :) I was only reading taeny angst, it's good to read a happy ending ^^ they are so perfect for each other~~
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