Chapter 7: Jaewha's regrets about the Twilight cameo made me kind of laugh. xD Anyways, the last two teasers were wonderful (especially Heechul's comments). I cannot wait to see who SM picked for the remaining slots. c:
Chapter 7: all the three teasers are so good! I'm really anticipating the other four teasers but I kinda feel nervous as well.
anyway, good luck to all the applicants!
Chapter 6: Whoa, 40 apps already? And although AKP articles are kinda overdone, I like that you made them really neat. Rine's twitter picture was hilarious LOL, and indeed, the 'super contrived' name is very fitting. I can see how trouble would brew over their friendships though. Also, based on her charity events with D.O, I suspect rumours will circulate and misunderstandings might happen between D.O's love interest and Rine. By the way, the fan-taken pictures are a neat addition~ I have a feeling I'm gonna adore Rine though, for her weirdness o u o
Chapter 6: I have to say that my hope dropped when you said you got all the apps you need
and that my character isn't anything near cute, I guess I have to prepare for the worst >,<
but no, I don't want to give up on this because your story worth so much than giving up halfway
I looooooove this so much!! like everything feel so real~
and I love their relationship with Suju, it's super cute~~~
here's another edited version. please check. I need another review. I found out that one of the main character likes manga and cosplay but i don't know if i should change it. http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/678670
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