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Monica94 #1
Chapter 6: OMG *uglycrying* I have never cry as much as reading this story..... I have cried before because of a story but dose where easy cries, I cried harder and more reading this..... it so sad..... why......WAE!!! You broke my heart, first it was all sunny and cute but then you went and break everything..... even my poor heart..... WHY ARE YOU SO GOOD AT WRITING!!!! T^T Someone give this person a medal, A NOVEL PRICE OR SOMETHING. I'M A EMOTIONAL MESS HERE WITH A HEADACHE..... But I will still read it again sometime (not now or in a while, my heart would die if I do read it again now) and I'm going to make my friend read this story so she can feel the same pain and emotional messy feeling I'm having now and I'm slowly getting my sanity back..... But..... Thank you for this story *koreanstilebow*
ettoiscy
#2
Chapter 6: omo this is so amazing.. idk how many times i read this... but i cant really think of anything beside the power of kaisoo aaaaa
ZeroPrincesses
#3
Chapter 6: Your an amazingly talented writer, your words just... how do I say this? Its like there's a dagger staked through my heart every second of this story and 'The 27th of October'. I wish you all the best for your up coming stoires... Your the best ^^
Beth22_woofie
#4
heart die with this,,,,its so well written,,,after 27th oct I couldn't cont.....than I told myself i waa ready to and here its killing me again T_T Kyungie's situation tears me apart
Parahelion #5
Chapter 6: T-T TAT T_T :'( *all the crying emojis I know (LOL while sobbing)
passionburn19
#6
Chapter 6: Da fuuuuuuk! Le soooooobs wuaaaaahhhhhh hiccup hiccup
angel2311 #7
Chapter 6: this is really sad and amazing T_T
asuka2507 #8
Chapter 6: Cried again...
triplepixie
#9
Chapter 5: WTF. THIS WAS SO MUCH KILLING ME INSIDE OUTSIDE. CAN YOU JUST BURY ME TOGETHER WIFF BAEKHYUN AND JONGIN? /CREY.
I'M SO MUCH SAD COS DIS ENDING TT
kpoppist #10
Chapter 6: The story was freak in amazing. Twas awesome! Nice job author sshi. But one thing; why kill them? Twas heartbreaking. But also good. Knowing people out there knows my types. Thanks author.
liechi_berry #11
Chapter 6: Oh no wtf. YOU CAN'T JUST KILL BOTH OF THEM ;A;

-sigh- feels aside I really like both fics a lot. The raw feeling was awesome.

Some grammatical mistakes took away from the feeling (maybe get a full-time beta?), but I really loved the plot and the execution of the story.

Thank you for character deaths and tears~ will look forward to future works ^^
jungdamy
#12
Chapter 6: Fck this i cant stand it you know at the first j just read and felt nothing until i hit the the last line 'that is our forever' and i was like what the hell is this gahd why am i crying whyyyy
0113pororo #13
Lost of words :')
YEOLLIEZEL
#14
Chapter 6: i am tearing up right now.. huhuhu. this is sad but still, this is an amazing story. T.T i love you for writing such an awesome story. ;')
taeminzy #15
Chapter 5: this is painful.. like hell..
Angel110
#16
Hey you =) Allow me to ask you two question
Do you want your story being translated into other languages and spread it on other languages' websites?
Or do you like translating and would like to translate other fanfictions into your mother tongue?
If that's the case, please check out the link below to AFF's very first Translation Shop :))

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/705430/ice-flower-translation-shop-open-hiring-translators-request-now-superjunior-exo-shop-translation-bap-translate-translationshop
MoonOfNight
#17
I know .. I'm too late.. But, Congratulations for getting featured ^^