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ChanVoice #1
Chapter 33: I just read this story and i finished it in one day :) i really hope u will update it cause im really curious
Alicezara2 #2
Chapter 33: Update please !!!❣❣
Fabiola1928 #3
Chapter 33: Authornim update juseyo 
Love this story ♡♡♡♡♡
mermanpoop
#4
Chapter 17: i read the title of this chapter as painful turds and i can't stop laughing hel p
redblackwhite #5
Chapter 23: True! I do not like the growing amount of reader insert fanfics! A huge M/M fan I am.
redblackwhite #6
Chapter 23: True! I do not like the growing amount of reader insert fanfics! A huge M/M fan I am.
redblackwhite #7
Chapter 12: I LOVE XIUMIN! HOW DARE U /sobs in a corner/

*dont mind her she's just depressed over her wicked bias wrecker*
redblackwhite #8
Chapter 7: My favorite kink in fanfics is ! Your writing is very nice by the way, I love it! Keep it up~
hunhannokizuna #9
Chapter 33: (Sorry, aff won't let me comment more than 2000 charactersm so here's the rest)

Hope you're doing well and my wish for this beautiful fic to be updated will be granted.
Thank you! For writing and sharing and being so wonderful^^
hunhannokizuna #10
Chapter 33: I understand the struggle of being a university student (to be really honest I even considered killing myself a few times out of the pressures my "prestige" uni gives me). So I understand if the updates will be reaaaalllllyyy slow.

But I do love this story and I don't want to only see Luhan suffering. This is a good fic, but I haven't actually seen the pack being what it is, a pack. The alphas are -for lack of better word- s (and they sure love ing one -lame pun forgive me >,<). I know it's in their nature, and that's how they act in their world, but honestly I want that one chapter where they simply being a family, united as one, like how you so beautifully stated in the second chapter. I want to see how the story will unveil and if they'll be bonded more than "dominating alphas and their precious toys".
Kai isn't that bad. He's actually really kind and I want to see him and Kyungsoo being happy together (because Soo is so deserved it!!!!)
Suho who knew something but kept it to himself, I want to see more of his fatherly figure. Chen who looked kinda bad (eventhough he's actually the one being rational), I want to know if he's the second Xiumin or he's honestly a sweet witty boy instead. ChanBaek who'd done the knotting, I want to see them being happy.
Taoris. I ship them and I really want to see more of Kris' sweet sides (because I feel like punching him in this story quite a few times~)
Lay who hasn't been enganged in actual conversation other than when he used his ability (healing and that patrol with Xiumin).
Then, HunHan. I totally wish even it's full of pain now, they'll be happy in the future.

So I truly wish you'll update this no matter how long. I need to be enlightened. I need to know what Xiumin's betrayal will end up like and what Luhan's premonition and the pack's decision will affect.

I hope you'll be given strength, studying in another land other than you're accustomed to.
fyrzadanish #11
Chapter 33: I still confuse here n there..so i need an update n explaination..story's great but i don't understand the plot...update soon..
luminaa
#12
Chapter 33: so i read 1-9 in livejournal and i was frustrated since it stopped in a good but bad part but i remembered subscribing moonstone in aff ever since 2014. i do hope you update! so many things and problems are happening now. :c
Fizzyizzy #13
Chapter 33: Omg I love your story so much!!! ^_^ it gives me so much feels, you're an amazing writer omg❤❤❤❤ I hope you keep on writing, Im in love with this story ❤❤
mayday16 #14
Chapter 5: i need to stop reading for around fifteen minutes to digest all tge feels that i got from this chap. hope you will be back soon. i falk in love with this story TT
nekopi #15
Chapter 33: I reread your story all over again so many times... It's so good and i hope you will continue writing it soon
Little_Miss_Cry
#16
Chapter 33: Unni!!! Update soon plx!!!! I'm dying here!!!!
conita
#17
Chapter 33: Hi! I am a new reader and I liked this story so much!!!
I hope u can continue with it soon!!!
the plot is really interesting!!!! I hope sehun and luhan can be together T_T
luv_g_ri #18
Chapter 33: Plzzz keep writing. I love this story and really hope that u decide to continue.
Frozenblossoms
#19
Chapter 11: I just started reading this story and its like 4 in the morning here and my feels are going crazy! If Luhan is pregnant of Xiumin, I'm gonna throw my mobile phone at the next wall D: