@iArwen: OMG AHHAHAAHAHAH I DUN THINK SO. B| :)))) AND NOPES, I KNOW SOME SPANISH THOUGH SINCE WE'VE BEEN COLONIZED BY THE SPANIARDS FOR 300 YEARS. @___@ OH MY. TO BE ON THE FEATURED AND RECOMMENDED ONES WOULD BE LIKE IMPOSSIBLE FOR ME AHAHHHHAHA XDDD BUT THANK YOU. T^T SO HAPPY THAT IT MAKES YOU LAUGH. OTL
@cathrel @forever-mine Oh, no, then he will have to marry her and poor Cathrel will have to stick with him forever! But may be that's what the author intended in the first place... Who knows? xDDD<br />
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@cathrel Thank you for making changes. I'm always glad to help you. Do you learn Spanish (El Presidente, me gusta)??? I would love to see you story among those featured and recommended ones. It's so interesting, entertaining and it makes me laugh a lot. ;)
“Shut up or I will kiss you!” He roared and everyone in the room fell silent.<br />
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I immediately hushed up, not knowing I was turning all red.<br />
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“Oooh, intense.” Sandeul whistled."<br />
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BEST PART EVER. -continues to next chapter-
HOMAYGAHHD. I LOLed so much at “Chicken. OMG YES." =)) Your story's sooo interesting~! Hope you update soon, cathrel-ssi~! :]<br />
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Btw, I love your Tumblelog. Heheh. It's always nice to see fellow fanboys there~ *3*
Hey, @cathrel! Hooray, another awesome chapter is here!!! *____* I've read it in one shot and I would really like to know what will happen next. That evil Chansik is not always eveil.<br />
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***“I’m not going to her.” Gongchan clarified.*** Very important clarification! I loved that part! xDDD<br />
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I don't know if it's OK for me to point out to some mistakes or typos. <br />
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***“I’m Chansik’s older sister.” She answered back and decided to give me a hug. “I can’t believe you’re the girl she’s going to marry. I totally approve of you!”*** I think you wanted to say HE not SHE's going to marry (meaning Chansik). <br />
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***WHAT IS WRONG WITH THAT DUDE??? YESTERDAY HE WAS SORTA NICE TO ME ALREADY AND NOW I SEE THIS? WTH. This dude is bipolar. I just know it.*** It's just an advice. Probably it's better to say "I knew it!" It's more like what they tend to say in the USA meaning "I knew it all along." But you can leave it like that as well. It's not a mistake, it's just another little part of the meaning.<br />
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I hope you don't get upset with my comments. >_< The chapter is great and you can read it and understand very well just as it is now. So if you don't want to correct anything it's OK. :) I'm still looking forward for the next chapters.
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