Chapter 2: It will be interesting ! But I am a little worried for SungYeol ahah !
Once again it's a very good chapter ! (sorry for my poor comments, but I just want you to know that I already love this fanfic! :D)
Chapter 20: Hii there, I just want to give some comments after reading your story :D
Actually I like your story a lot but somehow I'm not really satisfied with the plot. First, I find the transition between conflict--resolution and ending is a bit too rush. Because somehow when I read the introduction on how myungsoo and sungyeol developed feelings from each other I really like it and expect more but when suddenly the story just got to the when they broke up and got back again and then prom and it ended I just feel like 'uhh I want it more and know how strong their feeling to each other why it is ended suddenly?' :(
Second, I think it'd be better if you put more details on the characters' (especially myungsoo + sungyeol) insecure feelings in the story so that when you wanted to represent the conflicts it'd feel more real and logic.
I guess that's all .. Oh btw I love your ideas of your story and your writing style! Keep up the good work author-nim, hope you don't mind with my bold comments hehehe .. Hwaiting! (>̯͡-̮<̯͡)
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