Chapter 10: juliet & juliet is so good. well-written. really love the storyline. very very glad Taeyeon & Tiff finally safe and unite. is the story really end or there will be epilogue maybe?? ^^
Also, (I'll just add another comment here because I'm not sure if you'll be alerted if I reply to my own comment .-.) I'll be reading Juliet & Juliet tomorrow, because it's getting kind of late here.
Chapter 4: Oh my. At first, I skimmed through this short story and wondered how one could gather enough emotion in the small space and the diminutive amount of words one can place into a short story, but you pulled it off extremely well. I think I'll talk from an unbiased point of view as I read through your stories. The story began with a bland tongue, as if it was a brief summarizing, however once again, it's like a one-shot, you couldn't put much detail into it without making a full story to go with it. After Taeyeon arrived in America, I think that's when I began to read with a growing hunger for more. Taeyeon's thoughts on finding herself and her own identity but instead found someone else. I like how it was slightly portrayed that these happenings in her life had made her more confident, in the end she was able to stand on her own two feet and lead others. Tiffany suits the barista image.
As for writing style, there isn't really much to criticize, after all, it is your own style and really the only thing one can complain about is possible grammar mistakes, but I couldn't find any, therefore I'll be praising your writing instead of picking on small things. Your writing style is simple and prompt, but it's vague at the same time. It's really refreshing :) thank you for telling me to read, you've earned yourself a subscriber.
Chapter 10: Your stories are just AMAZING. It made me grin like a lunatic in the middle of the night. Keep up author~! Especially Juliet & Juliet. I felt so many emotions while reading it, like, I didnt even know a story like this could exist!
Chapter 10: Lol, that glossary is epic!
I loveeee this juliet and juliet story <3 it's freaking awesome, with old languange too, so the the readers can get more into the story
Please keep update :-)
Chapter 10: I like all your one-shots and even your multi-shot XD Great, You are so great! Haha! But I liked Houdini more, it was so cute I mean, the magics etc made me confuse but nonetheless, it was great!
Chapter 10: As ludicrous as it sounds, I almost wanted Tiffany to turn up with her reputation to help Taeyeon's kingdom with the Saxons, but then I realized that she was of less status than earl, so that idea didn't work out so well. I think it was mainly the abruptness with which you ended this last part, with action (action? Hahah) just a few paragraphs before. But might just be me, y'know!
I'm so guilty as beyond-charged of being a silent reader, so here are my cheerleader pom-poms and a Taeyeon's signature HWAITAENG!
Chapter 10: You know what that grand thing you needed was? HAHAHAHAHAHAHA. Or y'know, maybe a teeny bit more fluff towards the end idk. But enjoyable read. I feel a tiny bit of pity for the king bc yeah, he's gotta do what he's gotta do. I don't doubt that the kingdom would've tried to overthrow him if he let Taeng flaunt her ghey. BTW, go Taeng for KICKING THAT BISHOPS STUPID HOLE. AND YAY TAENG ENDED UP TOGETHER :')
And omg your glossary thing - I ended up just reading and laughing at the examples :)
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