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-OtpimusPrime
#1
OMG. AGAIN. WHY DO 1 OF THEM ALWAYS DIE. LOL.
Thumbs up, u r so gng on my author bias list :3 <3
forchenteller
#2
Wow.

This was beautiful.

Usually when I leave reviews, it's about the amazing plot, the emotions, the characters, so on and so forth.

But I just really want to get it out there that you have this unconventional way of writing that's very poetic and metaphorical and goddamn ethereal.

Seriously. You could write about garden hoses and I'd be mesmerized.

Ah, but I loved the anger in this story as well. Donghae wasn't just some psychotic, unrealistic artist. I mean, maybe a little bit. But he was very believable as well.

My favorite quote was Eunhyuk talking about how art can't love someone back and why - and after having it described to him, Donghae knew it for what it was right away.

I'm wowed by this fic alone. I'm off to read your other ones~
1412Bunny #3
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axiesz #4
you are beyond awesome...i envy ur writing ability...and sucha a wonderful story
animeotakupooh
#5
Whoa... I am left speechless. Donghae sounds exactly like someone who came out of criminal minds, but in a good way (?). the story left me speechless.
WhiteGalaxy
#6
OMG!! Where have you been all my life? ^^ So amazing!!
Elfshawols4ever
#7
wwwoooooooootttttttttttttttttttttttttt so shock!!! omoo so cool. so scar, it terrify me oh gosh..
strawberrymyeolchi
#8
Oh no...I knew this would be terrifying but I wasn't sure I saw it going that way. This is so sad and terrifying, and really representative of a lot of true artists. More morbid, yes, but the idea of obsession and purity. Such a good piece.
sarangeunhae
#9
Holy mother of God! that was awesome *0* u r really good. i loved it *-*
hoebaragi #10
I've had a feeling this is gonna end in an eerie, morbid way, since I did find out about you from another author who writes this type of fics, but it's fine cuz it's so beautiful. It gives that kind of enticing feeling, in a sickening way... I'm jealous of your writing ability :I
yixing-hae
#11
you are a GODNESS
this is really cool , am not one of people who like to read something like that with no dialogue but after reading yours and changcheree's i become obsesse by it
TheRealHepHap
#12
Somehow, I knew this would end in a morbid fashion. But that's okay, because it was amazing. ;DD
fyrefox233
#13
I died.
EeJouRin #14
Just love it. Reading it for the second time and it still does not fail to take my breath away, to make my heartbeat erratic.
innersense #15
donghae's love turned out to be the killer type *shivers*
i like it tho, i feel like i just watched a short movie lol i like
unexpected endings... :)
defyingdestiny
#16
Oh my flippin' goodness. I cannot even comprehend... I must say I admire the way you portrayed Donghae in this. Though the ending shocked me a bit, I guess I almost expected something of the sort. Donghae is the possessive psycho lover, eh? Now that I think about it, I felt a bit apprehensive at the beginning when Donghae said he was obsessed with Hyuk. Gahh. Well. I enjoyed it.
KeyDNA #17
I don't get it..what happened at the ned?
Did they stayed together? Did Hae killed Hyuk? Or did they just broke up? or..AH!! My brain's in pain >__<
Don't understand a out of it, but very well written <3
Nice to read, and hope that the ending was happy although I have a fealing it's not......
kimssi
#18
I was waiting for something like this.
My poor Hyuk and evil Hae, I hate you.
Hae's generally kinda sick in your fics, I guess you do this because he seems to be the possessive one in EunHae.
Anyway I liked and hated at the same time, don't know.
But you're an awesome writer, that's for sure.
Keep up the good work:)
strawberrypanties #19
Oh my... It's so... So... I've been playing with this or very similar idea for long time in my mind. And I'm actually glad I've never carried out this idea. I mean, on the paper:D I have to say, this fiction makes me feel miscellaneous feelings. Like amazement. Symphaty. But also disgust and moral disagreement. And yet at the same time I feel frightened admiration or respect for what Hae did. I mean,this story is just supposed to make me feel this,right? And you wrote it simply perfectly.
one_ordinary_boy #20
..... Oo" speechless..... and a bit scared...