Comments: My Mermaid Captive (Rated)

← Back to story

All Comments (79)

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
sugarandalmonds
#1
it's one of my fav. on winglin!!!!!
JaeSica4Ever
#2
i'm inlove with this story
starlove
#3
awwwww...<br />
i think jae is finally realizin his feelings little by little...<br />
update soon please....
MickyLover #4
Awwwesome!<br />
<br />
Update Soon!
rainyfriday
#5
Damn... Just when I thought jaejoong was starting to care for her, yunho pops in...<br />
And yeesh!!! You update fast mister!
MisterPotato2 #6
To: starlove <br />
<br />
Hehe. He saves her from a beehive of men. Posessive much? :P<br />
<br />
thanks for commenting agagin!
starlove
#7
well at least he saved her...<br />
better than leavin her to suffer...<br />
lol..<br />
updates soon please
MisterPotato2 #8
To: starlove<br />
<br />
awww sweetie, thanks for commenting agaiN! Yeah Junsu doesn't know JaeJoong is a confused with her uality. Haha! But he's just confused!
starlove
#9
jae is sooo mean to her.....<br />
junsu doesnt know jae is bi????//<br />
update soon please
starlove
#10
hahahahahahahaha...<br />
noooo...junsu CANT have the mermaid...<br />
she's jaejoong...<br />
lol.....<br />
jaejoong is jealous of both of them.....<br />
update soon please...<br />
lol....<br />
"you can always run but you cant hide"
MisterPotato2 #11
To: MusiqsoulELF<br />
<br />
Awww aly. Thanks for giving me so many encouraging comments. :)<br />
<br />
The rated scenes are cool and the cute scenes are adorable! Please stay tune.<br />
<br />
Haha by the way, I wrote this fanfic 2 years ago. :P<br />
<br />
My most recent fanfic is actually uous Love, but I'm not sure if it's for you. I try to change my style to a more upbeat mood and less confusing in terms of expressions and vocabulary as compared to my fanfic from past 2 years.
MisterPotato2 #12
To: Starlove<br />
<br />
Well, Yuri can run away from JaeJoong but she can NEVER hide.<br />
<br />
Haha thanks for your comment starlove. xD
MisterPotato2 #13
To:Babypink_boo<br />
<br />
Yeah I wrote on winglin previously using Zion, and now I'm using MisterPotato. Because I feel like I need to get out of my old identity for awhile. I can't update frankenstein yet, partly because I have a block. I actually already wrote the chapter and ready to post it but I deleted it when i re-read. I took a very long time but nothing good came out. So I was mad at myself and thrashed the whole chapter. Also there isn't motivation for me to write because the fic is more than a year old already and it's reader's aren't remembering what I wrote previously. So most reader's get confused. <br />
<br />
With regards to Vampire's pet, i wrote that when I was 16. It was a very amateur style of writing but many people loved it, I don't know why. The content is fun and all, but as I grew older it became harder and harder to write what I call, bubblegum fiction. My fictions became darker and more solemn, sweet but not over the top. So as a result I gain more older readers, but I lose all the young ones who cannot understand what I'm trying to express. I am trying to strike a good balance now, so I'm using MisterPotato as a start.<br />
<br />
I will update Frankenstein's Curse when I know what to write. <br />
<br />
Thanks for the comment.
MisterPotato2 #14
To: Mariangel<br />
<br />
Aww she turned human, but it was temporary! Please stay tune to see how the story will evolve. :)
MisterPotato2 #15
To: Fallingstars2<br />
<br />
Haha yeap it's weird. Cuz you know, no one ever tried drugs on a mermaid before, so who knows? What never happened could happen. HEHE Thanks for commenting!
MisterPotato2 #16
To: KhmerKrystal<br />
<br />
Yeah drugs somewhat affect a mermaid's body differently from how it affects a human's! thanks for commenting!
MisterPotato2 #17
To: Mayrie<br />
<br />
Haha yeah it's a malay word. how do you know? thanks for commenting. xD
musiqsoulELF #18
finished chapter 5^^ awww junsu is so sweet<3 hehexd lol , haha make sure its goodxD and more rated scenes lol lmao:p haha update soon<3:D!!
starlove
#19
hahahahhahaa..<br />
fighting over gummy bears...<br />
lol...<br />
happens all the times...<br />
lol...<br />
update soon please