Chapter 2: From what I have read, I'm actually enjoying their cute story, though there are few minor errors in grammar ?
I've said this before to an (aff) author, that reading snsd fictions and watching crime/investigation series puts me in a good mood. So whenever I'm pissed off and whatnot I'm either watching o reading stories here. I've only come across few stories that I enjoy. (Wow, I talk a lot) Well, my point is, I'm kind of picky with stories I'm reading. But whenever i stumble upon a good one, I stay. And read till i drop. ㅋㅋㅋ well i do fall asleep while reading sometimes or read until its 2 or 3 in the morning. (Omg. It's like an essay. Sorry author-nim)
Chapter 1: No sweat chaengoo author-nim! I've only been starting but I think I'll be sticking around. I'm always looking for fics that are actually well written ?
Chapter 5: I just started reading this story because my friend recommended me the sequel... I just want to say I love this already and I’ve been meaning to comment but I just can’t stop reading! Great storyline you have here authornim and thank you!
Btw I’m shocked that Yoona was actually her ex :O omg I thought you’ll pair her up with Seohyun at some point lol Yoontae is always welcomed though. ❤️
Chapter 2: Hey I'm reading chapter 2 right now (as you can probably tell), but it just occurred to me to comment this.
I love the story so far; I don't mean to sound like full of myself or grossly overconfident in whatever, but I usually only pick the stories I REALLY like for reading since I'm in college rn/don't have much time/etc.
I think that if you had just foregone explaining the exact circumstances behind Taeyeon's first girlfriend's death in the forward (maybe just say like 'Taeyeon feels guilty about her death' but don't explain why), you could have had an extra layer of like mystery/suspense that would only draw the reader in more. I have the feeling that it could have turned into a really interesting plot point: what about Taeyeon's ex makes him sad? What happened to her? Why did he react to Tiffany's words the way he did?
I'm sure you DO implement this as a plot point, but having the reader not know would, I believe, make this story so much more interesting.
Chapter 19: author-nim, this story is soo good <3. this chapter its make me feel sad when fany cry and scared tae will leave her T_T. but iam happy they can reconcile at end of chapter. sorry for my bad english.
Chapter 1: I just found this fic, seems this fic has interesting plot. Maybe i can't comment for every chapter but I'm really appreciate for your hard work authornim.
Chapter 19: Haha, your always welcome. Hey, this story is reallt great and the scenes (the fluff ones)/brought me laughing at them, and the night where tae puched Dennis?/i don't know, but i felt like crying, haha, anyway, this is so far a great and amazing story, i am excited to reach the end (p.s., i like Tiff's aggressiveness in here whenever they are alone. Haha, she's really is something.<3)
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