Chapter 19: Holy potatoes so I wasn't tripping out when I thought this chapter was super lengthy, but tht's great :D.
I was right about there being a Jung but I wasn't expecting a Hispanic Jessica who's a regular person & can kick booty xD. Aye~ and she be shooting at Taeyeon's digits hehehe. I'm liking this Jay, 1/3 for being a badass fighter, 1/3 for shooting at Taeyeon, & 1/3 for being Hispanic lol. Im sorry my Hispanic pride was getting to me. Usually Im not a fan of OCs or get impressed but Jay's great, Eli is too :3.
The fight was pretty cool, the plan was imaginable. Lol none other then Taewoo Bear, I was expecting Gain to be Sunhwa cuz she's super pale & can pass as a villian w/ her cackle like on Invincible Youth lol. Gain's awesome too, & gorgeous :3. I'm hoping Taeyeon (as the main protagonist) trains to become a badass fighter & surpasses even Jay's & Jessica's speed combined w/ Taewoo's strength.
Thanks for the lengthy update! Looking foward to the next arc.
Chapter 13: my gee.. i really love ur story.. the genre, the layout, the plot... i really really love it.. it was soooo much better than the other fan fiction that has always on it.. eesh.. (:
Chapter 18: this is so cool! i'm keeping an eye out for this. with an excellent setting and plot, any reader would be easily hooked up while reading this. this is just pure awesome! you just gained my respect author-nim. great job and do continue on with your awesomeness :D
Chapter 18: I seriously thought Eli was Endo, the Japanese speaking black guy who does GG dance covers, & that's the only way I can picture him xD.
Really liking this fic & I loved this chapter b/c of Sunny!! Totally being biased, & she made Tiffany jealous so we know she sorta has feelings for Taeyeon so fudge yeah xD! Would love to read more w/ her in the main story & if possible joining as an ally :]. Taeyeon in a maid outfit ljjgdaagkl oh Sunny lol.
My guess is that the demons finally caught up to TaeNy & Eli, or OR what if, just maybe its the Jung sisters :3? No? Okay.
Chapter 17: wow a very nice story you got here author-nim!!! i just started reading you fic today at 3pm and i just finished at 10 pm hehehe LOL... hmmm i really curious about THE BOSS AND THE WIFE and the TWO DARK FIGURES.. they're the one who save them right??? and the BADGER why is Mr. Hwang seems afraid/weird towards the name... Sorry for the super long comment ^^ i'm so excited for your next update!!! thank you ^^
Chapter 16: WOW THIS IS ONE IS SUPER DUPER HIgh class, so intelligent and and i feel like im watching it live instead of reading the story... gosh your so brillian to able to write this kind of plot....i assume that you like action or mystery...this is like ALIAS i love that series probably thats why im liking this...i only read taeny fic and it has to be romantic but the thought that they havent passed that phase and i am still reading it means i am really curious with your story....
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