Chapter 4: I just hope that ajjusi will help them overcome it..gulp

Chapter 3: oh i think i now kim cheonsa,,she's one of my friend in the AFF..ooh she's so lucky she got to be kris's girlfriend..i'm proud of you my friend
i think this is a mix of final destination and another horror-thriller movie but i forget the title
anyway,it's interesting :)

Reminds me of Final Destination.. /shudders

NUUUUU JOONMYUNNIE ;___;

lol bini Dato' LCW buat cameo di sini? Haha jk jk XD

Update soon, hwaiting :D

Chapter 3: It's begin...

Chapter 3: Omona.... The angel suho died.... This also proves not to text or talk to strangers >.< I luv the story plot~ Keep it up and update soon~~ Hwaiting!

Chapter 3: Nooo sweet Suho died I'm going to find that girl lol

Chapter 3: Who the heck is the girl ? It was thrilling actually ;) keel updating author-nim

Chapter 3: Suho :'c
nooooooooooooooooooo
andueyooooo
nooooooooooo
sob sob sob
i guess the ahjushi bad aura was damnnn right!
goshhhh!
ahjushi!!!
who's next??
save them!!!!!!!!
:'C

Chapter 3: (+)update soon,authornim.i adore this story v.muchiess

Chapter 3: i love suhooooo! no. he should not die! btw,kris is my lover!how can my life be more interesting?XDhehehehe

Chapter 3: why suho must dead?andwaeyooo!by the way,i love kris and cheonsa partXD very romantic.and what?i am cheonsa!!superb!

Chapter 3: bull____t.he's dead!:Onooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!

Chapter 3: Jesus!!!
Oh crap!!!!!!
why?why?why????
why my suho!
OH NO!
The old man 'aura' was true!!!!
nooooo!!!

Chapter 3: what thee~~~ why suho's dead???

WHYY?????????????

god. at the entrance of this fic, u already make a person dead. u are so evil..


and, there's one mistake i would like to pick out.


when u were exclaiming 'Suho's dead! Suho was dead!'
there's a grammar mistake there.
-Suho's dead (present tense)
-Suho was dead (past tense)

choose either one sis! :D

glad u manage to update in time before i sleep :D

Chapter 1: Is Final Destination your inspiration for this fic? It's cool though :)

Chapter 1: Omo. Maybe he can predict the future ._. New reader here !! *waves*

Chapter 2: who's that ahjussi????
gooooshhhhh!
anyway,
keep updating

Chapter 2: Did u got inspired by Final Destination?
I think i like this! And the old man....im so curious!

Chapter 2: Omo this is such a good story.. Keep updating ^^

Chapter 2: ok
this story makes me feel uncomfortable
you need to update fast
i can't wait to read it

Chapter 2: and now i gt that 'bad aura'!suhooooo!!!!oh jesus!

The story kinda reminds me of Final Destination ( I think that's what the movie was called) Instead its the girl that gets the visions of death and then she tries to save the people. I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE :D

Chapter 2: I guess the old man is true

wow it sounds really interesting!

lol.the same daddy in one more chance right?XDlol

Chapter 2: woowww.pdate soon!

Chapter 2: please save my kai authorssi
huhu
bad aura? waaarghh
thats a gift
i wonder there must be something hidden right?

Chapter 2: actually~~

what does gege means?? *smile sheepishly*

Chapter 1: Annyeong,neighbour ~
Your story reminds me of final destination :) Well,it seems interesting,though..click to subscribe button,then ^^

Chapter 1: horror mystery thriller and KAIIIIII!!
I am IN LOVE with this story

Chapter 1: Interesting story
So, kris has the vision
he saved their lives
and he became my hero
soooooo coooool

Chapter 1: thx for req this story to me! I luv this! >.<
I love horror I love thriller I love mystery

Chapter 1: Hello~ you sent a request! I will fulfill your wish! Sowoneul maribwa! Hahahahahaha. I really like how this story is starting off and it really sounds interesting so I will be anticipating for the next chappie! Though it sort of reminds me of The Golden Hotel series in AFF... Have you read these fics yet? I wonder if Kris is dead or if it was just a dream... Be sure to plan you're plot wisely because this sounds like a really good story. Thanks for letting me read this! I'll subscribe now!!

Chapter 1: Whoa, interesting! And it sounded like final destination keke

Chapter 1: oh gosh! this is interesting. did you based it on final destination?