Chapter 38: Wow.... What an amazing fan fiction you wrote. The storyline was so beautiful and the passion and love shared between Jongin and Kyungsoo was absolutely perfect! Very well written and described. Cute but abnormal side story pairings! I squealed reading each chapter because this was just such a cute and lovely story. Quite a masterpiece. Really glad I came across this story... Keep up your great work. Of course, I subscribed because your hard work and efforts deserved to be praised. Very nice work.
Chapter 37: I just love this story. So sad I have come to the end after days of reading. So detailed and the way you built the characters is just wonderful. I will miss them.
The thing I love about this story is that it didn't need any angst. Just normal everyday little obstacles that people find getting into a relationship but in the end the whole thing is surprisingly simple and sweet. Things just work out, pieces of your lives just fit together, that's how you know you're meant to be. That's how it was for me personally, so I LOVE this fic for reminding me of it all.
So thank you.
Chapter 39: (Continued) accountant (? Was he an accountant? I'm really sorry I can't remember now) and his rules and how he grows so much and the there's Lu Han and his relationship with Jongin, and then Chanyeol and Sehun and Junmyeon and the office people and I can't name everyone by name because that would be ridiculous (and my comment is already ridiculous because I said it was going to be short and it's already split into the second comment) but I really enjoyed all the side couples and small romances and Tao and Kris' relationship and just the sweetness that comes from reading about friends who care about each other interacting. I loved Jongin's backstory and it was sad and yet beautiful because he had his flowers and now he has Kyungsoo...the side story where his father came over was a beautiful addition to the canon and a gorgeous yet realistic way to bring closure to that part of his life; while it may be true that not all parents are as surprisingly understanding as Jongin's father turned out to be, yet it's a wonderful and precious miracle when they are. I feel like I've already rambled on for far too long but I should just add that I really like your Tao/Kris writing and wonder if you would ever consider trying a one-shot or something one day? I would totally understand if you can't but....it's just a thought. ^.<
Chapter 39: Well this time I really don't think I can manage to write a very long comment but we'll see. I'm really having to think back to "a much simpler time"{insert sarcastic side-glances at self} before exchanges or private twitter accounts or betas or writing all night, a time when I systematically read through the entire EXO tag on archiveOfOurOwn, a time when I roamed AFF browsing for stories to read and discovered: this. I know I read Everything Changes first but, thanks to a sad and strangely silly former fear of commenting (also perhaps the fact that I still was using a different name here and hadn't gotten my identities sorted out) I never did comment on that one, a fact which I shall at some point have to remedy. This, in any case, was the second. I'm pretty sure I found you through Anger Management but I don't think I read that one because it isn't complete yet (am I wrong?) so I naturally gravitated to the complete stories and here I ended up! Actually it's a bit of a lie that I read this story before exchanges; they were just beginning and I was at my summer job on the island and already dreadfully stressed out and this story helped me calm down and take a step back. I just remembered that actually; I'm glad that through writing this comment I could remember something like that. In any case, I've already gone off on a dreadful tangent without even beginning to comment properly. {insert loud and exaggerated sighing} Two things struck me about this story, right away: the flowers and the music. Though I think you have a slightly more punk music taste than I do, the flowers really connected with me; I adore the language of flowers and the concept of flower shops and flower arrangements and just everything about it really. There are so many books and mangas and animes I've enjoyed partially due to a flower motif. I loved the thought of a florist Jongin, and he was so perfectly shy and bashful it was adorable. I also really loved Kyungsoo the
I've not read fanfic since I was in high school and a friend linked me to this one and just 3 chapters in I'm hooked! Really cute and enjoyable to read ^^
Chapter 38: I love this one due that you gave a chance that Kai and his father be okay and allow him to do whatever he wants and decide to it and his father already understand all.
The cheesiness was still there in both of them really.
I thought this one was about their future but it came out that this was a part before the end.
So keep it up the good work authornim.
Good Luck.
Chapter 37: Yeah your right there are lots o stories about Kaisoo that was angst but I also read some fluff but still there are twist.
This one was way different it was full of fluff,sweetness and cheesiness. Just like the one you wanted.
I like this one it was not totally a cliff hang you gave the ending one great.
I will leave a comment here and also to the next one but I already read it so there is no difference on time maybe only minutes.
I can't say more because you update your readers by a long a/n of yours and I won't ask for for a side story of the other characters because you said you will do it so I will wait for that.
Oh before I forgot I'm reading already now the "Cafe Story" see you there.
Chapter 5: I like shy people, and Jongin being shy here is so endearing. Add adorable Kyungsoo and an amazing author to the list, and this story is now very fantastic. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story. (Damn you schoolwork!!)
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