This was the first EXO fic I ever read and means a lot to me ♥ it was long ago but I still come back from time to time to re-read it, because I love it that much :')
Chapter 23: wow, this was great, and chanbaek being my otp, i really loved them here, thank you so much for the bonus chapter. I did find it a little odd that yeol said his kid was a gift from his mother in outer space. thank you so much for writing this!
Chapter 24: This was interesting. I'm not a fan of angst but I thought the way you utilized it in your fic wasn't burdensome to the reader. It felt like natural progression of believable emotions and circumstances. Especially considering that IRIS - though full of good intentions concept- can cause many adults to be infantile in the development of their socialization skills. Which would undoubtedly create confusion in how to communicate and understand a partner was joined in marriage.
I thought that the scene editing you did was well discerned. Some authors have terrific ideas and plot developments but fail to realize that those scenes should be placed into another fic.
Thank you for the 'Gravity'. Baek was adorable.
Thank you for being a generous author who allows their fic to be translated. Being considerate to others still struggling to master english is compassionate. I'm personally learning Spanish and Korean to help me understand the shows I watch. And I often think about how much more I'd be able to appreciate the programs if I understood their language with the same fluency as I do my native tongue of American English. So huge props to you for your global social awareness and also posting the translated fic's links shared here. Sharing doesn't lessen the gift but extends the appreciation and enjoyment to others.
And I love mpreg myself. And there would probably be better birth control options if it was possible in real life.
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