Chapter 63: I just finished reading this story. By the way, I feel bad for luhan. If I were hyori, I would pick him over everyone. And even though hyori made a bit mistakes in the past but I don't think it's that bad. I think Kris is a selfish jerk, that's why I don't like it when hyori forgave him too easy. Looks I know hyori said she likes luhan before while she just started a deal with Kris however I don't think Kris could be mad at her Cuz they didn't know or like each other yet besides she just said she likes luhan not love and she didn't do anything inappropriate too so yeah Kris can't complain about this. And minhyun part, I don't think Kris could complain about it either Cuz from the beginning he knows that hyori still love minhyun. If not, why would she makes a deal with him? So it's not hyori fault. About jaehyo part, I don't think it's that much of a bad mistakes of her too. Look that times, she and Kris were still bickering and mocking at each other. Kris still acted like an arrogant guy to her most of the time so of course she wouldn't know if Kris likes her or not. So yeah if she likes jaehyo, it's not her fault Cuz he's a great guy, gave her love, respect, and almost everything a girl could ask for. And even though she had fun with jaehyo but whenever Kris called her, she always went back to Kris. So yeah she didn't neglect the rules of their deal like Kris though.
Chapter 63: HI I'm a new reader here. I'm not meant to be rude or anything but I think you made a mistake here and chapter 43 you wrote that Kris was the one who tell everything to jimin about the fake relationship even the deal but this chapter 60 Kris acted like he didn't know that jimin know that he has a deal with hyori.
Chapter 60: well for me the flashback chapter is important. it reminds me how selfish of her if we see how the things happen right now. not gonna lie, if i was her i probably do the same thing. kinda. well, ppl do judge anyway. this is my opinion. and this chapter is what i'm waiting for. Min Hyun explained what he's really feel towards her. glad they're become become friends.
Chapter 78: Well, the ending is so sweet and great and all.. But, how about my angelic Luhan? Okay then, lets say he's gonna meet with me and fell for me and of course forget about Hyori :D Anyway, Great story!
Chapter 22: oh dear they are so childish. i can't belive that they would graduate soon :D
well, if i were Hyori, i will cut all ties with kris. i mean, what kind of relationship is that? our activities just study, study, and study. i'm a lazy person haha. it's good that hyori can manage with him. but seriously? why does minhyun not showing any emotion? didn't he love her? what a jerk!
Chapter 13: well, the korean words start to get annoying. no, i don't mean to bash you or anything. just wanna give an advice that you should just use english if your story is in english. of course you can use korean words but it doesn't look proffessional. i'm sorry if you feel offended, i'm saying this for your own good. well, i still like your story tho :)
Chapter 8: hello, i've subscribed you fic for a while now, but just read it now. and well, there are typos and grammar errors here and there but it's okay. nothing's perfect :)
sometimes i get annoyed when the pov changes. but i think it's fine for your story. well, when hyori's heart went thump thump when kris touched her face, i think it's too fast for her to like kris. is she starting to like him now? i couldn't see the process. however, your story is interesting :))
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