Chapter 35: Oh my god~ the ending really not excepted...
so kris just dreaming about his memory with sooyoung on the past...
aaaaakkkkhhh this one really beautiful story T.T
So touchy...
Chapter 35: oh god, 35 is so beautiful. I want to read it again and again. your writing is breathtaking, and I don't believe I have ever said that before. that was just wonderful.
thank you for that. that made my night
Chapter 35: This is my first time to be commenting on this collection of Sooshots. Damn. I did not see that ending coming. And coupled with Debussy away with the blacks and whites just sent shivers down my spine. This, along with all the other stories in this collection are simply superb. I applaud your writing! ^_^
Chapter 6: Brilliant! Short and sweet, but to the point. I love how you wrote 'casual perfection' when talking about Jaejoon's mussed up hair, such great usage of oxymorons :) Don't mind me, I'm a literary nerd :P And I love the ending kiss too, very y and passionate. Especially the contrast between his bitter cigarette tongue and the sweetness of his lips. Dude, you really should lead a creative writing seminar one of these days, you've got skills! Major props :DDD
Chapter 5: Awesome oneshot :D I loved Sooyoung's speech about love, friends and family - very pivotal to growing up and moving on. And I loved her final words to Luhan when he asked her out, about being right on time. Love this pairing a lot, don't know why I never thought to read more about them before :S Terrific writing, major props :DDD
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