Chapter 44: This has an interesting plot, what with the time travelling theme going on and all, and it had the potential to be really good. I came across this fic because it got featured and i read it with high hopes (obviously it won't get featured if it's not any good) and although there are some flaws that i found from here and there (such as continuity ie: when junmyun asked kyungsoo out, he initially said tomorrow night but then when kyungsoo said yes he answered with "see you tonight" i dont know if that was on purpose but it was a little confusing) but all in all, this was an interesting read! i hope you're not offended by my comment and view it in a constructive way instead. You have the potential to be a great writer so i hope you'll continue writing and keep on improving yourself. ^^
Chapter 44: I hardly swear but this is so ING PERFECT. god I am in the middle of math class right now and I can feel tears flowing into my eyes. I finished the story within 3hours. This is so good !! Beautiful ending!!!
Did i finish reading this or not? I forgot and i missed a lot of chapters and i have start at the beginning coz i forget what part i am already.
Aish! But i do know that i like this story before.
Chapter 44: Wah, I just finished this.. No wonder you're being featured with this super awesome story......... I was screaming like a maniac when Kyungsoo didn't remember Jongin. Wah.. i really love this... and I was crying like a total freak when Kyung said he remember Jongin..........
Chapter 44: Omg im crying right now, that was.......so beautiful. Absolutely a very very very great story and I'll definitely recommend it to every single person I'll meet. Like seriously thank you for writing this i wont forget
Chapter 44: OH MY GOD!! I AM CRYING RIGHT NOW. I GOT GOOSEBUMPS AND ALL MY KAISOO FEELS I JUST-------I CAN'T! I WAS MOVED BY THIS STORY ! This is so awesome. Hands down on you, author-nim. You earned my respect!! *cries*
Ilitrary cried my eyes off .this story was touching in so many ways and even tho iam new to it ILOVED IT sincerly It touched my heart it reminded me of how could love do to the person how could it simply change him from bad to good etc.. it was like u planned this story so carfully chapter by chapter .ithink that u deserved to get freatured u totaly desrved it .iwill look forword for more of ur spectaullar stories .
Chapter 44: I've squealed,threw my bolster,and screaming nonsense while reading this.this is too beautiful.I dunno Su-Gramps can be THAT furious.I even talked to my exo book(to Jongin,Kyungsoo,Junmyun,and Yifan's pic to be exact)like a weirdo.I love this.good job Author-nim,AND BY THE WAY~KYUNGIE IS SUCH A CUTIEEEEE~can you recommend a great baeksoo fic or a beautiful exo fic?maybe a crack one?thanks Author-nim!
Chapter 44: Gawd. This story is just plain awesome. It was so exciting and nerve wrecking in the last chapter but I'm glad they are together now XD
Kaisoo is the best!
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