Chapter 10: You updated finally!! Thank God it's still not 48 hours since the last update XD
YH can't get enough of his Goddess!!!! Aigoo, the morning after is full of shyness and Hyun is so adorable.
I like their intimate scene a lot, haha, but I wonder when Hyun can take initiatives instead of Yong. She's still new and need more experience in this field ^^"
I hope for more sweet moments and jealousy perhaps since they're so into each other now
Keep up the good work and thank you so much
Chapter 10: Waaaah!!!! I thought I will still gonna wait for wed or thurs for you to update good thing you did tonight! :D
Yah! Naughty yong hahaha ,,,,can't get over with seohyun,,hahaha getting addicted??eyyyyyyy byuntae! :D
I love the teasings!that was cute and funny,,,jeongmal,,,,! Make it more often please :))),,,
I just wanna ask this bcoz I'm quite curious,,will seohyun won't get pregnant? Well because they aren't using contraceptives and their might be a chance that she will get pregnant by yong...right??
Waaaaaah jonghyun and yoona! Good news indeed!sweet haha like his brother eh?
YAAAAH! JUNG YONGHWA!! Aren't you going to propose to Hyun just like what your brother did??? Aishhhh sincha! Seohyun might feel envious to yoona and jonghyun...! YONGHWA PALLI!! Make a move!
Chapter 10: OH MY GOD THIS IS SO SO SO HOT! *squeals*
the way you describe their intimate scene is just ... aaaawww I'm blushed! it wasn't dirty or explicit, I could feel hyun's shyness, yong's desire and passion, and most of all their love towards each other. GOOD JOB! I expect more, LOL.
and woow jonghyun and yoona are now engaged! totally unexpected, I thought yonghwa would propose to seohyun first.
Chapter 10: They're so passionate in love. Hyun gave her all in this new found love and YH adores her to no end.
Btw, Jong Hyun and Yoona are super fast. Ahh, I want YS wedding, too and YS babies XD
Will they meet her father soon? I hope father-in-law will be pleased with the news.
Amazing writing of intimate scene. It's not just but full of love.
Chapter 9: "I'm his current girlfriend" yaaaa that's my girl Seo Joo Hyun!!! I like that idea really... I thought hyun will have a low self-esteem in front of sulli but it's 180 degree different!! even yong slightly stunned with her answer.. kekeke
finally they did it! :DD I'm glad that hyun finally ready for yong... she's yours forever yong~ :)))
I'm ok with ty scenes.. considering that they relationship is getting deeper and emotional, so it's natural for have more.. kekeke XDDD~
I love this two chapter and waiting for the next... fighting! ^^
Chapter 9: Thank you for updating and I totally live this chapter. I love that they made love.....not have ....they made love. I love how he respected her by waiting for to Hyun herself to realized that she's ready. Its like he want he want her on all the right terms and right moment. I love how She handle herself when meeting be of his ex-gf. For someone that never been in a relationship before, she handled the situation really well. This was an awesome update and loved all parts of it. As for ... I love if the story needs it and the time is right. To be honest, I agreed with you, With playboy yonghwa's character, there should be more but like I said..,the timing and moment must be right...or he might end up being a _____ dog and really does not suit the perfect seohyun in this story. I can't wait for your next update. Oh. One more thing I love your story is how you describe how Yonghwa feels when he looks at seohyun. It brings a closer feel of how much love Yong feels for seohyun. I also love that seohyun does not want his money...I am hoping this story will go on with how Hyun finish university and how she finds her own career. Update soon.
Chapter 9: It marks such an important milestone for their relationship!! Hyun now belongs to Yong wholeheartedly and I hope he will treasure her much more than this.
The ex- gf jealousy is quite interesting. i actually like Sulli after watching her drama recently so I'm not feeling much annoyed towards her bratty attitude. Uhm, I bet Hyun will encounter more ex-gfs of his in the future. Show them what you got girl.
I'm ok with scenes. It's natural for the story to flow with further development. Yup and those explicit scenes will sure have some meaning behind it so I'm curious to see how they will get used to this new physical connection
Thank you and hope you can update soon
Chapter 9: This chapter is so sensual and hot! I like it how YH has patiently waited until Hyun is ready to do it. He'd better keep their relationship going stronger after this.
I personally think scenes are needed for the story setting since YH is portraited as a young, obssessive guy. As long as you put the "M" rated tag vehind those chapters, it's warning enough for the underages and they can choose to read it or not.
Thank you and keep up the good work
Chapter 9: OH MY GOD THEY FINALLY DID "IT" ♥
I'm glad that hyun are getting more open and comfortable with yong. I just hope that yong will never ever break her trust. hmmmm but on the second thought, I think a little drama will be good hihihi. I like the small drama you inserted on this chapter, about yong's ex-girlfriend. luckily hyun could manage her jealousy :)
I don't mind reading scenes, in fact I enjoy it, LOL now you will think that I'm a _______ :)) but I have to tell you this, the most important thing in scene is not the intensity but the feeling and emotion you're trying to convey. it doesn't matter if it's intense or hot or not too detail as long as your readers can feel the emotion. and when I say feeling and emotion, it doesn't always mean in a _______ way, LOL.
good luck! I'm looking forward to read the next chapter! :D
Chapter 9: Omg i'm sure Yonghwa did enjoy it. Hahaha and I like it if Hyun is jealous. ^^ i just thought that maybe Hyun wasn't so open to him before coz "maybe", if she'll give it her all, it might hurt her in the end if Yonghwa leaves her. Hehe. But it's a good decision hyun :)) totally support you guys. Haha
Uhmm, my comment on the author's note... you can just summarize the ty scenes, authornim. Haha it's kinda not suitable for the young ones ^_^
Will definitely wait for the next update!
Fighting! <33
Chapter 9: I thought you won't gonna update today,,but luckily you did.. :D well, you can make the ty scenes explicit in accordance to their situation or to the scene,,if you think that it's not necessary at all to elaborate it then don't,,,just make the summary of their ty scene as simple as it is,,,
They already did it! Omo,,,that was intense! Hahaha well hope yong won't change just because his done getting what he wants in the first place,,,but as the previous chapters,, we all know that the feelings he have for already developed and deepened because hyun is perfect for him..what more can he ask for?right? Kekeke,,,,,
Hope that with this,,it will make their feelings for each other get stronger ...
Jealous hyun is funny,,haha yeeeaahh get that Sulli? She's the CURRENT and definitely that LAST! :))))
Awww that long?after 48 hours for the next update? ;((( ... Well, goodluck!see you again on thurs! FIGHTING!!!
Chapter 9: I'm just in time for this new update ^^ OMG, hotness overload, finally SH trusted him enough to take a step further.
I like a jealous Hyun, hehe, she is definitely in love with him to show such action
Thank you so much. I actually don't mind ty scenes as long as the plot needs it. YS is becoming hot recently so it's acceptable, lol
Have a great weekend. See you next week :)
Chapter 8: *ive been reading your story this past few days, but i only manage to comment now.
Their so cute i can feel their love to one another. Yonghwa is super inlove to seohyun. I like him being jealous over kyuhyun.
.this is really amazing, i almost cried after i read 'Flight heading to
Singapore from Seoul crashed
into the ocean.'i thought he realy took the flight.hehe kinda cute drama u put here.
.im super addict to your fanfic this is super cute,lovable story ever.
.thankz 4 this nice update.cant wait 4 d next chapter.
.hoping 4 more sweet moment to comes.
Chapter 8: this story has become my new addiction ♥ I kept checking on asianfanfics, looking forward to your update.
I really really like this chapter! finally they both — yes, not just seohyun but also yonghwa — realized their feelings towards each other. and it's really nice to see seohyun's development in this story. I expect to see more :)
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