Chapter 15: omg I was laughing at that accident /can it even called an accident/ at first uh uh
and yixing' hands were holding wufan's neck I just-
but you know what? one thing that distracts me the most is sehun. he needs to know the truth really lyk srsly ToT
Chapter 15: My God, this chapter was so..... asdkjladfjkfds MY FEELS!!!
Dawwww! Suho, you amazing leader, you amazing guardian angel, you! And kekeke Henber and Khuntoria! >:D
....but BANANAS?! and MELONS?! Really, Kray, really? And then you just move on from your awkward conversation? I DEMAND THAT BOTH OF YOU GET A CLUE ALREADY!!!! Grrrrr.....
Haha but besides my complaining about clueless Kray, I don't think I would've been able to accept it if they just confessed right there and then. It would've still been too fast, I think, although my Kray feels probably would've been satisfied. I appreciate how you take the time to build everything, thank you for not rushing and keeping things realistic. <3
Chapter 15: this story is so amazing, i really am in love with it. how you portray everything so realistically is such a good plot line! honestly, kris is an idiot, jin sang is a jerk, yoona is an angel, and suho is a freakin guardian angel. That whole beginning scene, with kris jumping out, calling suho for help and stuff, and then yoona! which was a nice surprise (i dont even follow snsd but her coming to rescue was awesome) well that whole scene kept me on my toes alot! i hope mr. nam doesnt do anything to them though...
and then when they almost got found out and jongin got hurt, my heart broke. they really are doing so much to help yi xing out here... i really hope that tao finds out the real reason and comes on board the KrAy ship (aka help LuKai) cause he already is, with that whole Chanyeol thing, and I feel like he would be more help then the others... (IDK, but he seems to have a romance feel to him)
I love the KrAy ending lol, and KHUNTORIA!!!! I miss them so much TT.TT plus all of yi xings little stories were so nice!
all in all I loved this chapter and cannot wait for more!
btw, idk if it was from this fic that I found out, and im sorry if it was, but I remember reading a background story on Lu Han that said he actually didnt mind homouals in china, being friendly with them even though it wasnt right in society? IDK reliability of predebut stuff like this, but I found it a nice fact that goes with your story...
OMGee this is random, but I just clicked on your username, and I see YESUNG AND KKOMING! Fellow ELF and Cloud? Who also ships Henber? Waaaaaaaaaaahhhh!! >.<
Chapter 14: OMG I love this story so much you have no ideaaaaa. It's not AU, it doesn't move fast at a crazy pace and is actually REALISTIC, and is wonderfully written. You made me laugh, made me nervous, and almost made me die from cuteness. Definitely subscribed! ;)
Chapter 14: I love this story! Really, I love all the chapters and I cant' wait to read the next. Please update soon ^^
I love your writing style and characterization!
(Sorry for my english. I would like to write you a very long and detailed review, but I can't T_T sorry. But I love you ^^)
Chapter 14: Well, first of all: Please, don't let any bad moment happening in the next chapter, because I'm not sure I'll be able to handle it.. I'm really really REALLY hoping that all is fine with Kris.. TT____TT So.. Can you?? ^^'
Then; I love your writing style very much. Really. But you know, it's not all here. Uhm. How can I say.. Well, the fact is that you have this power that makes me feel what your characters are feeling in a certain situation.. For example, when I'm reading Kaisoo moments, I can feel their emotions - Awww Kai is soooo cute&adorable! <3 - and you know, even if I don't ship them - sorry, but I love Kao and KyungMyun <-- EXO_K's umma and appa u__u - , I'm joining their now-growing-friendship, and it makes me happier and I can't stop smiling whenever I read about them ^^
Oh, another pairing I wasn't use to ship is SuChen - because I ship the XiuChen.. - ... but.. Aww how cute Jongadae is whenever he wants to catch Suho's attention??!! <3
Well, it's all, I guess. I don't have to say things about the other two pairing coz the're too obvious - BaekYeol and HunHan, love them toooo much <3
And.. Kray is the way! ALWAYS in my heart <3 XD
Chapter 14: This story is just lovely (funny and exceptionally well paced). You really made me fall in love with Kaisoo - I've never enjoyed a story with Kai in a pairing before, but I just love the shy and awkward moments between them. They are just so adorable! (I also never expected to be this entertained by Suchen - never saw that one coming. Of course I love Kray and Hunhan as well!)
I'm so thankful that you're giving every single character the attention and spotlight they deserve, without getting lost when it comes to the main story/pairing.
So what I actually want to say is: I love this story and your writing style and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! =D
Chapter 4: okay. this chapter is really completely loved. It's bloody hilarious and touching (the last part).. I love their characters.. and idk.. it's just so brilliantly written..
and though Kris is my ultimate EXO bias.. I think I love them all the same in here.. ^^
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