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superjunior #1
Disturbing, yes but so amazing. T_____TT<br />
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creepy that he did that. I reacted too much and accidentally pulled the plug of my laptop haha. ):<br />
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I hope you write more fics like this ! :)
saranghaemolkogi #2
This is oh.so.AMAZING and btw I just read this and guess what time is it here...<br />
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it's freaking 11:25 "PM" and I was like...<br />
"Okay, so Donghae died. The story is a horror one which means... Donghae's soul is somewhere near Hyukkie?"<br />
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but when I read about Hyukkie taking Hae's DEAD body I was like.....<br />
"No, not this kind of story...." still finished reading it, though. :)) I'm a pretty psycho so instead of bein' scared, I was like... uhm.. smiling/laughing..? hahaha. :))<br />
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what made me a little less frightened was this:<br />
"What? But I have accepted his death. I just can’t stand knowing that he’s six feet under the ground and all by himself—hehates being alone, after all."<br />
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"Please. No matter how much you try to convince me, I will never have Donghae buried. It’s bad enough that his soul is gone; let his body be with me."<br />
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Hyukkie's got a point so let him do what he wants. :))<br />
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I SO LOVE THIS STORY ^^<br />
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*If I threaten Hyukkie will he come here? lemme try....... (oh, I hear footsteps...must be hyukkie....hahaha.)<br />
*Ok, I'm done blabbering here ^^ I love you and your stories! <3<br />
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themagiczebra
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Thank you all soooooo much for reading~~. =^^=<br />
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sujulove429: Why don't you write one anyway? Writing horror is fun~~. =]
golferox
#4
hahaha, my friend actually JUST told me i should write something like this after i told her i like to write darker stories about death...but you, my dear beat me to it and di a much better job than i could have done :)
cloudy_turtle
#5
Indeed very Creepy and Disturbing...<br />
But wow... I'm amazed.. it's very different from the other oneshots i read..<br />
But seriously, an interesting and awesome oneshot~
escapism
#6
wow...<br />
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this is just wow!!<br />
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it was different this one shot. It's creepy and it's like Hyuk was actually talking to me
indigoskylight
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...wow....<br />
Im stumped.<br />
Wow...<br />
this is awesome :D
kohiaddict
#8
this is a very disturbing oneshot... BUT IT WAS SO GOOD AT THE SAME TIME~!
m4z3lt0v
#9
creepy!<br />
but very well written... XD<br />
it's like hyuk is really talking to the reader... interesting indeed...<br />
thanks for sharing this! ;p<br />