Comments: Quicksand in the Dark [One-shot]

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saymyname
#1
Chapter 1: OMG this is creepy but I LOVE IT <333
Although saying this makes me creepy but yeah, I like story like this
-OtpimusPrime
#2
O.O.....
Did Donghae jus... EAT HYUKjAE?
Omg. Omg omg my poor heart. OTL
forchenteller
#3
This reverse chronological order thing worked really well in this story.

Gaaaah. I can't tell whether I love or hate this >.>
jewelgirl
#4
uwa !! i... i ...
no really i'm speechless ...
i got freaked out !!
==> love it
you're an amazing writer !! <3
Elfshawols4ever
#5
wowed....... hae! youre a cannibal! oh noo
sarangeunhae
#6
No words can explain what im feeling right now °Q° I just loved the way u put the things *standing ovation*
predictator #7
HOLY .

THE WAS THIS!

/died

/cannot find the right words

/permanently camps out here, though you'll probably never, ever, ever respond. LOL.
namaste #8
YOU,,,,YOU,,,,I have no words...
just keep writing, will you? ^^
fyrefox233
#9
It's backwards O.o you're a genius, pure genius, I love you and your ever famous disturbing themes...
chuwichuwichibi
#10
Whoa. Whoa, like, whoa. Awesome.
EeJouRin #11
Ten thumbs up if I had ten thumbs....
YuWook
#12
that was really really well written :)
saxmetal08 #13
That last line was pure genius. I like your style. Please keep writing.
desertrose88 #14
that was scary n sad at the same time <br />
I like it
Crazeyfishy #15
it gives me a freaking hell out of me! it somehow made me... suffocated. but nevertheless i like it
aintyoufunny
#16
Ridiculously amazing. Honestly. I admit that your stories like these freak me out, but it's in a good way. It makes me go, "WHY DID I READ THIS?!" to "I LIKE THE PAIN!" Honestly. I adore your stories.
Lala1901
#17
Nice story.<br />
But it's rather confusing because of the on-going flashbacks, but it's still AWSOME! Nice way of being together for ever! ^_^
golferox
#18
Note to self, reading horror at 2:30 in the morning in the dark room is NOT a good idea...so freaky, but so awesome...