Chapter 1: OHHHHH MAI GARD I am soooo excited for this. BARELY done with the intro and I MY KAISOO FANGIRL IS FLAILING. I am highly open minded to new concepts for Kai and D.O's characters because a wide variety of them have already been covered, so when an intriguing one like this comes along AND is able to get me like alllllll the concepts I have already come to love, you BEST be ready for another hyper fan to be added to your list of readers! I usually wait until the middle or end of a story to comment, but you're one of those that I just couldn't help myself with!
CAN'T WAIT to continue and check out your other work! (^.^ )
Chapter 15: Ah, this was so wonderfully written. It kept me interested and engaged and I loved that. Most stories that go for angsty approaches with death seem to be dull in a sense even though it's written very well. You probably aren't here to read these comments anymore since you've stopped writing, but I'm so wonderfully blessed to have gotten the opportunity to read this. Literally the part where Jongin was like "pass the butter I'm gay" nearly killed me and had me laughing and peeing in public. But in all seriousness this was brilliant, when I was so sure of a death in the end there wasn't. And it was actually quite a nice surprise I'll be honest. You're monologues, on Jongin's end, about uality or the way he perceives life, and then the soliloquies and monologues you give Kyungsoo when he spews his emotions. /cough/ I'd go back and highlight and make an analyses essay of the quotes but I'm far too lazy to properly remember the things said let alone go back and look/COUGH/ Otherwise, you have a very unique way of knowing life and it's people. You understand things in life and were able to magically put it into this fic in a way for everyone to understand (that, or i just 100% completely agree with everything you wrote in here and wish I knew ppl in real life who did). But there was something you wrote that struck me as "oh my god that's it, she put it in words," or it just really changed how I feel about the thing but I caN'T REmemBER whAT iT wAS. But no seriously, you know things about life that most of us don't and thank you for sharing this with us. Whatever you may be going through and what ever is happening, I hope you can make it through like a strong Jongin and Kyungsoo here. I'd probably go on a longer rant about the characters and how much each of them were beautiful in their own development-but let's not get too nerdy here, ahem. But thank you, it was a pleasure to read this.
I've read this fic so many times and I love it so much to the point I read it on road trips to kill time and on vacations when I was bored. That might sound a little exessive but haha-- glad to see its finally featured.
Chapter 10: GFDI I SPENT THIS ENTIRE CHAPTER CRYING MY ENTIRE EYES AND NOSE OUT ONLY TO READ THE LAST SENTENCE GZS;KJDGFR ;SZKJDG LKSJE FGTLKHSJ DRGLKF IUGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Chapter 15: this is perfect..like so much mixed feeling and..I love you for writing this !? (I'm gonna start looking at Interrobangs and laughing then crying then laughing again because of this)
you got featured!!! congrats!!! although this being is already long overdue. one of the first few fics that got me hooked real bad into kaisoo...now I'm so doomed and couldn't turn back...lols!♡
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