Chapter 5: "But the Institute doesn't permit us Exons to use our bodies' parts as a way of satisfying our customers' problems." I don't know why I'm laughing right now.
Chapter 4: First of all, this is such a good start! No spelling OE grammar mistakes that I could see, you have such a solid plot going on here, and I love how it's like I, Robot meets dystopian world meets something special. Can't wait to read on!
Chapter 32: Hello there :) I have finished the story and I must admit that I really like the way you write the story. It's very interesting, it's like you given the a life/soul (what am i saying lol) to this story. I am looking forward to the sequel that I wil read soon. Congrats on getting featured. Have a good day! ^_^
Chapter 29: Read it all in one go. Beautiful. Particularly not one for sci-fi stories, but I'm glad I gave it a go. Truly a wonderful read.
Loved it :)
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