I just love the torture chamber part....XP... and at the end... sixsome....XP....

can i just do the ice part in my ? i think it'll feel great. hahahaha.

His Jon be hhawt not hot hawt

Omooo! ~ *w*<br />
there`s nothing that can get ier than this xDD<br />
You do a great job! i like your type of writing :D<br />
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FIGHTING! <3333

*clear throat*<br />
i never imagined U-KNOW can be this..<br />
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omo.. im sweating to the max.. when reading this!!<br />
FROM THE TEASERS!!!!!<br />
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you're great.. nice..

OMG>.

2 words.<br />
LOVE.<br />
THIS.

OMG

i love it ! :DD

I love it , keep up the good work ! :)

WOW. haha. it's my 1st time reading this kind of fanfic. you've done a great job on this. ;)

I know this is a very late comment but I loved this and hope you will continue to write amazing fanfics :)

0_0 on the other hand<br />
i totally loved it ^^

Loved this.. although I know it is very sinful. Haha.. I would love to have oppa deul like this.. even they make me slaves as long s they treat me like her. hehe.

Loved this:)

I think it's really sad that is like, the most popular thing on AFF these days. ;-; But I guess that I am just as guilty as everyone else for enjoying this. My only suggestion would be to work on your use of present and past tenses (you shift between the two ALOT; maybe I'm the only person irked by this), but other than that, this was a nice piece. ^ ^

woah!!! i wish i had oppas who are protective like them... but not like in those intense parts... :D love it!