This is my first time reading a story between idol and you ( who doesn't have name) its pure you as a reader..
its interesting, usually author made a story idol and you, and they still give the name for "you" but you maintain whole story without given "you" name..
its really good story^^
I don't follow exo much or know much about Kai but I always thought he was kinda mysterious. I think your writing really captured the 'essence' of 'Kai' really well. I was sad to see myself nearing the end of the fic because it was really captivating and I really did not want to finish it. Good job, this is one to remember and I'm so glad to have stumbled upon this gem of a story. Looking forward to reading more of your work!
Chapter 30: So this is my first comment on this website. I usually just browse and read the stories here but I have to comment on this one. I absolutely loved it. The flow of the story, the character development, each adjective used to describe a situation, and even your choice of vocabulary. There was a perfect mix of romance, angst, and comedy. You made the story completely unique and realistic, and paced the storyline well. I'm quite selective of what I read, and the quality of this story is one of the best I've come across. You're incredibly talented and really have a way with words, as cheesy and cliche as that sounds. I look forward to your upcoming work and I hope you always continue to write.
Chapter 22: I love the main OC's character <33 and ofc Kai "I can't promise anything. But I like you. That's all I can say. I like you. At least ... if you can't trust anything else. Trust that." I died...
Chapter 30: OH MY GOD!!! OKAY RIGHT NOW I AM LIKE WOAH!!! THAT STORY WAS THE BEST THING I HAVE EVER READ!!!! WRITE MORE!!!! I love the part when they were under the stars it's something I do a lot and think about my dreams I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!
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