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CrushedT90
#1
O_O GTOP IN A 2MIN JONGKEY STORY.....I LOVE YOU <3 lol this is amazing update soon :3
kiwi1017 #2
AHHHH GTOP <3~
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOUx8492018474910....
And suree :D
ParkMiyoung
#3
I liked it alot more <3
shineemilly
#4
Yay I love gdtop!
luckydolphin
#5
Dragons?! I like it! Z^_^
Shinee-locket95 #6
I was a little shocked when you mentioned me. Haha
Yes you did good. ^____^ Im kind of a silent reader but I will start commenting. Kekeke Chapters 14,15,16 were good, but chapter 17 was great. Im glad you fixed the caps and i will be waiting patiently for your next update. Ganbatte!

~Shinee-locket95~
luckydolphin
#7
Oh good! Thank you so much for explaining that! I was really confused on what exactly was going on when they suddenly talk about with Onew and Jonghyuns ??? I'm unconfused now! Thank you! I really appreciate it!!!! ^_^
ShawolShadow22
#8
Awwwwwww this is sweet! >\\\< I love how they are all together and getting it on . . .
Omo I must be the worlds biggest creeper to think that! O_o

Can u do a teen top one? With l.joe and Niel??? That would be awwsome! ^^
CrushedT90
#9
YAY THE WAS AWESOME XD
luckydolphin
#10
I liked it! But I got a question, are they all in a some kinda open arrangment kinda thing? Since Taemin has giving s and Onew and Jonghyun sleep together? Im confused, or was it just thug of the past or is it still going on? I love 2min, seriously, I do but in a way I couldn't thief first rated chapter seriously since they did it around people and other reasons! But nice !!! ^^
ParkMiyoung
#11
my comments on the : the and the screaming were ok, but they were exaggerated by the caps. you don't have to put on caps to type those. The was ok though. though with the LuNew the sentence of: "come to oppa" kinda cracked me up :p and the ending with Taemin was hilarious. you should just continue this and who knows, some other readers can give you some tips to improve that you can use. I'm looking forward to the 2min :)
ParkMiyoung
#12
well you already updated 3 chapters so I dunno if you still need my answers but: 1. absolutely yes! and don't pass on it! 2. well I read enough of that in chap 14 so how about some 2min?
btw you should rate all your chapters M since chap 14 was also M but you didn't rate it :p
infinitive
#13
You did really good with the Lunew and the Jongkey one. Waiting for 2min :)
SHINeexxxXD #14
Kyaa... . .. I hope my bro didnt catch me while reading it in my fone. .. IT WAS GREAT XD
kiwi1017 #15
GAHH!! HOT >.<
Can't wait for 2min!!
ShawolShadow22
#16
Can't wait till 2min!!!! >\\<
shineemilly
#17
Teehee jongkey was hot! Can't wait for 2min!!!
LizzyNanaJongKey #18
OH GOD JONGKEY ARE SOOO...*Shiver*
shineemilly
#19
Lunew was great!!! Off to read the jongkey !!