Chapter 16: I've been waiting! I'm so happy this was updated, kind of had my eyes on it for a while and it's definitely one of my favorite Wheebyul fanfictions. Good job~
Chapter 15: This is more than exciting! Now miss moon be a good mentorbto whrepup and send her to hwasa's. Hwasa be a good lion and confess. Sun be a good yeba and save the moon!
Chapter 14: It's so interesting to see how Wheein's outlook on life as well as her perspective towards her surroundings changed after letting out her suppressed emotions and self. I like the shift in atmosphere after this part: 'However, not all secrets are shared when they're ripe. It can be sour.' What a contrast: Wheein was able to share a secret with Miss Moon but not with Hyejin, whom she had known much longer.
Wheein really went for it huh by referring to Hyejin as her other persona. Wow, the atmosphere got cold with a simple '"Wheein."' I could just imagine the whole scene with how you described Hyejin's discomfort and tone of voice.
I like how their conversation went almost as if it's something they talk about every other day. Hyejin was laying her cards on the table. It hurts a little though seeing how Wheein felt as if she was betrayed. I like this part: 'I take a swig of my beer. It's bitter. I wanted to ask her - what about me?'
It felt really heartwarming to see how despite Wheein's struggle to understand Hyejin completely, she didn't focus on herself but focused on Hyejin instead. The way they resolved their issue with that laughter is probably something only they could do.
Oo that thick atmosphere between Byul and Yongsun. The way you described it is really great, like this line: 'Even though the staff room is large, the kitchen feels small.' I really like how in both Wheein and Byul's parts, you made use of the sense of taste to describe their emotions, particularly that of bitterness (in this part: 'Yongsun always has her coffee with two milks and two sugars, diluting the bitter taste. If only her sweet tooth could dissolve the bitterness of our past.')
I like the comparison between how quickly Byul snapped and how it took the kettle a longer time to boil. Wow, that single line from Yongsun was so impactful. I really like how the title of this chapter means different things to Wheein and Byul, where for Wheein her relationship with Hyejin turned back to normal, but for Byul, everything's so far away from being normal.
Chapter 1: Yow I just randomly stumbled across this story and I got to say that this chapter-even though it's short-managed to pique my interest! I'm intrigued! Looking forward for this story author~ ♡
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