Chapter 4: Wow, I wish this would be an actual series because it’s so fcking good!! I kept getting drawn in as the story got deeper. It leaves me only to imagine how the rest of it would be D:
Chapter 5: For once I’m glad to get the happy ending, I’ve been binging angst and sad stories all day lol. I needed this happy ending. Love the way you worked this prompt!! So good.
Chapter 2: Woah. What a contrast from the first chapter. I know people would die for that forehead kiss, but that just makes me wanna take a shower.
I'm so curious now about the OC and Sehun and their whole deal. From what she said, it doesn't seem like Sehun was always this possessive of her, so I wonder what happened that turned him into a "monster". I'm glad that she hasnt given up, though. Yeah, I'm just left with a bunch of questions.
Chapter 1: Awwwwwweifjdnsjsksm I know he said to stay away, but I don't want her to :'((((( I snorted when Sehun let her keep that hoodie bc let's be real here ain't no girl ever returned a hoodie a guy has given her XDD
Junmyeon's plan to cut Serena up like a fillet is pretty ing cruel and I lost my at the possibility that they were going to breed her like wtf. I was about to write myself into the story to break her out, but Sehun beat me to it. I don't mind :) And I see you Chanyeol calling her "her" and . Atta boy.
Mermaid stories always feel magical to me and this one was, too. I also had Skott's Mermaid running through my head as I was reading. Listen to it if you have the time because it's quite a magical song.
I really appreciate how Sehun defended her and rebutted that she's the same as humans - as them. She deserved to be respected and not treated like an experiment or whatever just bc she has a fin. You probably didn't mean anything beyond that sentiment, but still I very much enjoyed it. <3
Chapter 1: I really love all your fics. The way you write them and makes me feel like Im living it. I loved reading skin to skin and I wished for a continuation coz I couldn't get enough of it - what I always feel when I read any of your fics- but I understand why u make them short. Now I'm just so happy to read this. Keep the good work
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