Chapter 9: Fate really seems to be playing with Yoona..But why is the real reason she left Seo??And Seohyun now has a kid??Keep writing author-nim,I'll be cheering you if I can...Plus happy ending pleaseeee :(
Chapter 4: i do like the cover.... and i am liking the flow of the story. i am eagerly wating for seohyun to come out hehhehe .... it's nice that my advise have been helpful to you. if u want to improve ur writing then try to read other stories as much as u can to help u get some ideas on the flow of the story. plus a piece of advise i learned from high school. try not to use the same words in the chapter. u can try substituting the words with other words of the same meaning ( happy- joyful, blissful, cheerf,merry jolly)
You dont know how happy you had made me by commenting that you are loving my story. Thank you soooo very much.You have boosted up my will to write. And no I am not gonna take your advise negatively so don't worry. In fact I appreciate that you are taking interest and helping me improvise. Thank you once again. Will try to update soon. And btw did you liked the cover? I made it myself.
So see you until next update.
Chapter 3: hmmm excited to see Seohyun making her appearance. I'm no expert in writing but a piece of advise for a fellow writer. u can use comma in long sentences.
ex. After getting up early, Yoona finished......
-sorry for pointing it out though. i am not intending to criticize u but just giving u some pointers for ur future reference. i hope u won't take it negatively.
I am loving the flow of the story so far. keep it up and thank u for bringing such wonderful story for us to read.
As you've described yourself as an amateur writer I suggest keep the plot, work with it and see where you'll go ;) Every story needs to starts with something and you have it
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