Chapter 1: Good writing. good structure and word flow. Not to mention, youve made your moonbyul to be a great main character to root for. Yong is currebtly 1D and mysterious, and thats expected from the first chapter. I love it.
You sold the premise well, so im reaaallly looking forward to the next chapter. No pressure, though. Im good at waiting as long as the author doesnt declare permanent hiatus.
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