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Fireflies123 #1
Chapter 26: This chapter was very amusing. It’s funny to eee the guys squabble over every thing and getting on each other’s nerves. As always Nari remains a neutral force trying her best in whatever task. The little moment she had with Kai by the lake was sweet but also very revealing. If only Kai knew just how untrue his statement was. Poor Nari, I have hope that Luhan and a Sehun will save her in time but the position they put her in is just terrifying.

Thank you for updating. Stay safe.
oreonine
#2
Chapter 25: Hellooooo!! I missed you! Thank you for the update! I can’t help but to sigh with all the boys being unmotivated and forced to do this aaaa plus with the tension they have with each other wow its such a mess but i hope during their stay in the camp they’ll understand and be truce with one another!!! ahhh our dear nari is quite stressed too! hope she develops her potential soon! im getting excited because this is getting more and more fun
BlackWhiskers
#3
I LIKE THIS STORY SO MUCH!
I think the transition is perfect and although there aren’t much exo scenes with nari I know that when they come, they’ll be AMAZING! Thank you so much for writing this. I love it a lot, and I can’t wait until the boys become a real group
davian
#4
Chapter 25: Oh Jeanie what have you done
No sight of civilization, oh man
I pray they get their act together on time
davian
#5
Chapter 25: Oh Jeanie what have you done
No sight of civilization, oh man
I pray they get their act together on time
Fireflies123 #6
Chapter 25: The short choreographer and his insulting remarks towards the boys plus Xiumin and Kai having to be held back by the some of the other guys was funny. Their headmaster is definitely a headache but hopefully the boys are able to pull it together in time. The boot camp will be very interesting for all of them, since it’s meant to bring them closer perhaps what really happened between Baekhyun and Chanyeol will finally be fully revealed and squashed but that’s wishful thinking. I also want to see Nari get more confident with her skills. Hmmm I also noticed that Suho hasn’t gotten his stage name quite yet perhaps Nari will be the one to name him.

Thank you for updating. Stay safe.
Lovelyyzz
67 streak #7
Chapter 25: Bonding time ^^
The guys need a little bit of encouragement because they seem off and Nari needs a little bit of confidence because she has a lot of talents but questions herself. I hope during the camp the thirteen of them can open up and be closer.
Thanks for updating :p
BlackWhiskers
#8
I finally finished the posted chapters!
I like that every one of the boys have their own personalities! I’m not a Luhan biased but I find that I really like him in this story. Baekhyun’s a total I wish he chokes on something. I also believe that the girl in his picture is Nari. In a way we don’t know who her parants are and I think that she might be in the same status as the rich kids bug we just don’t know that yet.
Again, I really like your dialogue and your English vocabulary is superb!
I feel sorry for Chanyeol ;(
I really like Sehun’s character too lmai XD
I like this story a lot and I anticipate what’s going to happen next.
BlackWhiskers
#9
Chapter 4: Omg Baekhyun’s an in here (still haven’t read this chapter) I wish someone would give him a slap. I have a feeling that all of the boys are s >.< I wish Nari is smart enough to understand this and gets her armor ready! I really like this so far even though i just read two chapters, ahaha. You’re great! I like your dialogue, too!
CezzaC #10
Chapter 24: yaaassss an update!! i'm really liking how all of this is turning out and the differences in interactions are creating absolute gold plot points, plus the usual amazing character development and writing style, keep it up xxx
staceygwen #11
Chapter 24: Congratulations for team Nari for winning, but I guess Nari does have her work to do because taking in consideration Baekhyun's action and Nari's intuition, it ain't gonna be easy. I hope all the best Nari sweetie. Thanks for the update and Stay Safe
oreonine
#12
Chapter 24: Hello omg thanks for the update! my my baekhyun im feel so sad for him tho, i hope he’ll love to be in the band soon. as for now it feels like he’s just letting things flow because his team members let him go too. pats for u babie :((( but hey!!! congrats to team nari with their teamwork!!!
Fireflies123 #13
Chapter 24: Poor Nari she definitely has her work cut out for her. If I’m correct then the boy band is officially assembled by now. All they need to do now is practice singing and dancing before the competition. Good luck Nari.

Thank you for updating. Happy belated birthday and good luck with school. Stay safe.
Lovelyyzz
67 streak #14
Chapter 24: I feel bad for Baek but I'm sure it's a decision he won't regret in the future.
Also the whole group needs a bonding time.
I love Jeanie's character. So hype ^^
Thanks for updating ♡
oreonine
#15
Chapter 21: Omg! Junmyeon is so cute! Must be tough for him to be a workaholic ;__;
staceygwen #16
Chapter 20: Chanyeol is very cute in the end, though gotta admit didn’t expect that from Baekhyun thought he’s nothing more than a . And for the bullying gotta agree with Nari.

P.S Thanks for the update and Stay Safe
Dyoooo
#17
Chapter 20: woah I've been subscribed to this story for so long but today was the first time I've read it and its sososo good
I regret not reading it earlier
CezzaC #18
Chapter 20: Ahhh hello again!!! well this was a cute update with just enough drama to love it! thank you for updating and stay safe too x
adelaraloera #19
Chapter 20: Wait is this the type of reverse harem where they all crush on her but she only ends up w one or is it the one where they all end up w her???
P.s. I love this storyyy<333
Fireflies123 #20
Chapter 20: Your back!!! I really loved Chanyeol's two part chapters. I hope he can finally stick up to his dad. I also hope that him and Baekhyun can smooth things over. Natural and Chanyeol are kind of adorable together ngl. Thank you for updating. Stay safe.