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blockbuster01 #1
Chapter 23: I can't wait for the next chapter T.T
Luckychicken101 #2
Chapter 23: This was a must read chapter!! Really felt a lot of relief reading this, but a tinge of bitterness of the outcome.
Consequently, I think this what happen when there is a re-lapse in a lot of things.
MoonSun14695
#3
Chapter 23: this is so awesome!
you wrote such an amazing chapter!
can't wait to read how things will turn out
this is so good!
and also good luck in your finals :)
jubis-
#4
Chapter 23: U GO GIRL!! Narae took the words from my mouth!
IT UP, ALPHA!
I forbid Sori to forgive them all!
aritzia
#5
Chapter 23: Thanks for the update! Really interested in seeing how the stalker storyline plays out!
chichiba #6
Chapter 23: I don't want Sori to forgive BTS yet, I don't want Sori back to BTS, I just want her live peacefully with her baby, stress free from all her previous pack problems

I'll wait for your next chapters, good luck with your showcase and final authornim ;)
miramiumiu
#7
Chapter 23: I am so proud of Narae for letting all that out. I love her for being so loyal and caring for Sori. Though i agree with herself that she could’ve done more when Sori was there.
BTS should be reaaaally ashamed of themselves. They should bend on their knees if they want Sori back in their pack. NOW you want to say Sori belongs in your pack huh Namjoon? Didn’t even have the decency to actually search for Sori after she left for 2 WEEKS! Not even any of them. UGH.
Sori is hurt so so badly she’s even looking down on herself as a turned were.
Yet she refused to tell EXO what happened because she still respects Namjoon and didn’t want people to think badly of him.
That Minyoung DARED to make a face when they knew about Sori being pregnant with JK’s child.
She knew Sori was pregnant but she let her do those strenuous training and starve herself?? UGHHH that .
Oh I knew that man was the wolf that attacked narae at the time because I remembered him Sori’s neck that time. Ugh creepy wolf. I hope EXO will protect Sori and hunt him down.

And Sori dear, i hope you become a much stronger mummy physically and mentally. Don’t forgive them that easily, not just because you love Jungkook. Make him and them work for it.

I don’t know if this is too extreme, but i kinda wished that Sori somehow had a miscarriage after an attack or something so that BTS will more and more regret of what they did to Sori. I’m feeling evil towards BTS here haha.
And then maybe later on in the story Sori and JK can have a baby out of real love and not just an accident?

Felix, you made me cried big load of tears in this chapter and the previous one.
I can’t wait for more in the next chapters!
girlnextdoor #8
Chapter 23: There’s something off with Minyoung. Is she the traitor? Or is the wolf attack is because the one from Sori’s past want Sori? Or is it something else? Namjoon Jungkook and the rest of the packs need to try really hard to gain Sori’s trust again. They hurts her too deep! Curious about how they’ll try to make Sori forgive them. Thank you for the update!
dearmonet
#9
Chapter 23: im gonna admit that i kept on checking if you updated already, heck, the moment i woke up at 5:00aM i immediately read it and c r i ed bye.

sori’s stalker was so freaky, but its good to know the history of how she was turned.
but hi, im so glad of how exo esp baekhyun and suho treats sori!!! can’t wait to see more moments between exo and sori!! and watch bts get jealous yikes! iI just love how exo can be so protective of sori( baekhyun was real cute tho oof)

and cheers to narae for stubbornly fighting against that dumb alpha, namjoon was so frustrating. and minyoung was just really disgusting . i know she doesn’t like turned wolves plus the fact that now she’s jealous of what jungkook and sori really have lmao. is gon get it from me if she does anything fishy.

now of course, his tlike everyone else, i don’t want sori to quickly forgive bts for what they did, im hoping she would get stronger, and more confident, just like how exo mentioned that they can still train her if she would like

and im abit grateful that jungkook is willingly gonna try harder to gain sori back, it’s gonna be a long process, but it’s a good start. no matter how of a dickhead he is, i pitied him because he was suffering plenty when sori was gone. hopefully he can overcome his fear on his father so that he can finally embrace his feelings for sori.

but oh boy, can’t wait for the next update and see how bts attempts to gain sori’s trust + more exo and sori moments. it’s gonna take long since you’ll be mia, but i can wait!!!... maybe

so funny though, that everything we talked about happened in one chapter Knsbsbs
bibibe
#10
Chapter 23: Narae preach was on point!! I feel the anger and sadness and i have to read them thrice because I was crying. I was happy Sori was safe and Baek and Myeon found her, i was low key prying that any of BTS member was the one to save her that time, but oh well. Also Minyoung? I already hate her on the previous chapter and I hate her more she knew but she didn't tell. Grrrrrrrr. And oh well BTS make sure to work hard to gain Sori trust again.
Btw sis Goodluck in your finals and showcase!!
himiko29 #11
Chapter 23: I was not expecting Minyoung to know. I hope yoongi went to go see Sori. Definitely got teary eyed reading this chapter. Good luck on your finals
jade17 #12
Chapter 23: Damn.........Minyoung had a almost nonexistent role in the packs problems. Didn't think about the idea that she could be devious enough to know she was pregnant and just watch as she tortured herself. That earns me a slap, cause she was already prejudiced against her.
meluvme2 #13
Chapter 23: not gonna lie. You had me feeling all sorts of emotions with this chapter. I don't know if I want her with exo or bts now? so conflicted. And don't even get me started on that line, where she told Suho that es couldn't be trusted when she couldn't help them with cooking. Goodness graces, this girl had to endure so much on her own before and with bts. But i gotta hand it to her, she is one strong female. Now can we talk about how kookie is going to finally realize that he has been in LOVE with her the entire time, but his stubborn has not come to grips with it. I need plenty and many of graveling from bts's part for Sori. She deserves so much better. They need to be on bend and knees asking for forgivess and trust from her.
FanficLover36
#14
Chapter 23: Does that dude that turned Sori have a name? Coz i need a name to cuss at :)

If Sori does want to go back to BTS she better make them suffer as much as she did, if she doesn't she a fool and I don't like fools. Same with JK, he needs some serious rethink about his priorities.
Idc how in love with Jk she is, she better not forgive him just because he regrets his mistakes. I know I sound a bit mean but its time Sori toughens up.

When is Minyoung gonna disappear? The girl is so obviously jealous that of Jk and Sori esp now that Sori is pregnant. She's probably the type to betray the pack just coz of jealousy, won't be surprised if she does or already has.
soshi16
#15
Chapter 23: Oh my gaaaaawwwd. Thank you very much!

I cant believe it. I was right Sori is with EXO. HA! Baeks so funny tho. Ugh. And dont even start me with Minyoung. Maybe JK and Minyoung are having thats why she is very jealous of Sori. And doesnt want to have her back. My god but the evil wolf doesnt know sori is pregnant right?
kawaii_anime1004 #16
Chapter 23: YAS GIRL FREAKING PREACH PREACHHH FINALLY!
I was literally in tears because my heart ache to remember the way they have treated her and the type of pain she was feeling.
I really hope BTS tries their very hard to gain her trust again. They better work their off.
Sori should definitely not give into them and better make sure they fully understand the pain she had to go through. I hope she continues to take care of herself and the baby. I wonder how does the other members felt when Narae told them and what are they thinking about while the member mentions in the chapter were having a talk??
ricemask
#17
Chapter 22: Hi again. Had to read several chapters on a row because i was laaate. And wow that last chapter was heartbreaking. I felt so bad for sori... Idk but i feel like something tragic will happen ? can't wait for the rest of the story. The details and descriptions are still on point. I empathize with the main character a lot. I feel like she needs to be away from others and think of herself for once. Maybe it's a good thing to leave the pack for a bit...
Good luck with the rest !
KimTeff #18
Chapter 22: For they mistake
KimTeff #19
Chapter 22: I think it's better that Sori hide and pretend to be dead, so others will feel guilty and suffer.
jr72ok #20
Chapter 22: can't wait for more. i finally caught up