Chapter 2: I'm happy to see that Sehun is doing well. He deserves some kind of success to be added to his name. I can't help but think that Irene sees him as more than a boss/friend/whatever their relationship is. I may be wrong but their conversation looks to be one you would see between close friends.
It's sad but nice to know that Jinae is still in Sehun's mind. First loves are hard to forget but at least Sehun didn't let that affect him everyday during the 7-year gap. At least he has good friends by his side. I will be waiting to see what will happen at the reunion. Thank you for this chapter! :)
Chapter 1: Poor Jinae. I really dislike the mother-in-law. How dare she brought up Jinae's life as if it wasn't a personal topic. Her and Hyunwoo seem to have no filter in regards to talking to Jinae about anything. Jinae's dad is so different and I like how he contrasts so much to Hyunwoo's mother (and possibly his wife from the first story). I'm curious to why Jinae visits the children so often. I wondered if something happened to her for her to do that. Thank you for the first chapter! :)
I subscribed for this because not only do I love 'Agony', I also love your way of writing. I like how you describe feelings in a simple yet powerful way and how you make the story so vivid. If you need a beta I'll be happy to help :)
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