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taekjongjin
#1
Chapter 9: Honestly, I super loved this chapter, but also feel kinda emotionally drained.
Not Kyungmi-sitting in front of a convenience store kinda drained, but omg that was a ride there.
Poor girls who are already drunk af, honestly. The night is long and they are already done :/ Just hoping there will be no real bad consequences there. Just look at Hoseok, he not only lost his tshirt, but also some brain cells :D:D

Omg Hojung's secret is out. I wondered how you would let them all meet and I'm more than satisfied and happy with it. Also very much understood her character to how she'd never would want to make a scene out of it for the cameras. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THAT :)
Can't wait for her to meet her brother :))

I loved Iseuls conversation with Hyungwon so much. I hope that her wanting to help him get all this off his chest kinda made an impact on him. Also her just leaving him to another contestant out of politness was so sweet of her. I can only imaging hyungwon watching after her as she left the room and be amazed by her persona. I really ship them somehow.

Also Haru giving Changkyun a cold shoulder is what i live for hahahahha plus Haebyul needing to tell people "THAT'S MY SISTER" was just too cute :D We know honey, you look the same :D:D

Can't wait for the next one :))
luv_kero
2472 streak #2
Chapter 9: Yaaaay, Juna is back and I'm so glad she's one of the S2 producers! :D She's hilarious and she pulled off the teaser really well. :P And omg, I was wondering why the rappers' intros were so different and now we know they're a bunch of bickering children, HAHA. :')

Oh my gosh, I'm cracking up at Summer and Hoseok's scene. XD How did this man-child get so drunk?? I'm living for how he's such a hilarious, ditzy drunk. :D I kind of want more drunk Hoseok, just for stuff like this. :P And yesss, we have the backstory on Hoseok's lost shirt and bless Summer for making this happen. Not to mention, she's a very lucky girl for now being possession of this shirt. :') It reminds me of when I saw Wonho taking off his shirt in concert and then tossing it to the audience. The fangirls in P1/P2 swarmed to snatch it for themselves, LOLOLOL.

Oh my, Hojung seems like she's a bit no-nonsense as well. I wonder how she'd get along with Sook. XP And ahhh, that must be Kyungmi in front of the convenience store. OTL Poor girl is not having fun in this nightclub. ;~; And reasons, Hojung! Kyungmi has reasons, just like everyone else on this show! >___< Oof, I wasn't expecting Hojung to already have connections with Jooheon and Gunhee. :O And omg, wait, Jooheon is her BROTHER?!? I definitely wasn't expecting that. OTL Oh man, this will definitely bring out drama if the producers catch wind of it. And this also makes me think that Jooheon probably isn't a Hidden Card, but then again, we've just barely started and who knows what's hidden up his sleeves. >o< And omg, wait, Gunhee is her EX?!? Literally so many things can happen to Hojung and I'm so curious to know what's going to be next for her!

Ooh, I wonder what Iseul's goal is. Idols dating is a touchy subject for companies and fans, especially if they aren't well-established (or even if they are, as evidenced by the complete mess that is Cube handling Hyuna and E'Dawn's relationship and what happened to Taeyeon and Baekhyun several years ago D<). I wonder why her company let her join the show. :O Oh my, look at her being proactive! But TBH, if I were her, I'd do the same. :') Hyungwon seems to be an enigma so far and I wonder who's going to end up solving the puzzle pieces. >___< Man, the producers and the audience would've had a field day if they had managed to catch Iseul and Hyungwon's conversation on camera. Especially since idols are supposed to be "pure and innocent" (altho maybe Iseul's group has a more mature, y concept?), so her speaking so blatantly about the contestants sleeping with each other would be a head-liner. Ooh, looks like Myunguk is stepping up her game. And Sohyun is such a sweetheart. :')

Awww, poor Sara. Q___Q She's feeling so down about how she did in S1 and the aftermath must've so much, especially since it was on national television. Honestly, huge props to her for putting herself out there and trying again for S2. Most people would've given up, especially since it would be so traumatizing and embarrassing to be eliminated early AGAIN. And nooo, Sara, you are just as gorgeous as these other girls! You have your place on this show! Agh, I hope Sara gets far this time. >___<

LOOOOOL, I hope the Darth Tater nickname for Sook sticks. XD And I'm totally with Yonghwa on watching this scene unfold like it's straight out of a drama. :P Real-life drama, when you're a spectator, is the best. :') Ooh, I wonder why Kihyun had to leave the bar?? That for Hayeon and Ran, since they were so close to meeting him. But at least they got to interact with another bachelor, so all is not lost. And awww, Minhyuk is so nice. ^^ I'm also very intrigued by Yonghwa being so fixated on Minhyuk being her son?? What's the deal here??

Ahhhh, so many questions, so many mysteries creeping up already! :D And good luck with uni! :) I also really appreciate how much time and effort you're putting into this, so thank you!
samasbananas
#3
Chapter 9: Yass, an update so soon? QUEEN. I figured since I did it for the first season, I'd keep up with my list of thoughts. Hope you don't mind long comments that have many words but don't actually say much of substance :')

1. Could that pink haired producer possibly be Juna? I frickin' hope so
2. I live for Jooheon and Changkyun's dynamic already and it's only the second chapter
3. Kihyun is a sassy little bean
4. Summer, God bless you for getting Hoseok to take off his shirt
5. Hojung is just done 25/7
6. Ooh, Hojung girl. Spill that tea shister
7. I already ship Iseul and Hyungwon. Are they Iswon? Hyungeul? Idk but whatever they are, I ship it and it's only the second chapter
8. Saraaa! I love my bby so much and I can feel her pain of being the Bachelor's Reject
9. YES Minyoung, be a go getter. Interact with those other contestants and a bachelor
10. Sara, hunny. I love you, but you know you can't hold your alcohol
11. Yonghwa is actually me. I live for drama too sis
12. I'm enjoying Ran and Hayeon a lot. I feel like it's the start of a beautiful friendship :')
13. Yonghwa is certainly interesting. A weird child metaphor? I dig it

For the question, I'll PM you my answer ^^
samasbananas
#4
Chapter 8: Umm, so I took forever to read this. But unsurprisingly, I love it bc I love your writing. I can just picture everything so vividly and it's written just like an actual reality show. I enjoy how you changed it up from the first season and added on screen words/graphics like they actually do in Korean shows. Here's a list/stream on consciousness thing

1. Ran is frickin' cute
2. You nailed Minyoung's personality and her dynamic with Sara. It's exactly how I pictured the duo
3. Ooh, Ari is a dancer too. And a professional one. I wonder how Minyoung will react to her, prolly not well tbh
4. Eunha, girl, I'm ready to jump into a pool of handsome, young men too. Btw I love her
5. I hope Iseul lasts longer than Jaemi last season. I think the idol dynamic would be interesting since she wouldn't want to give a bad name to her group or label
6. Yass Sohyun! I'm excited to see her lady like nature play out and contrast against the other girls, especially Minyoung
7. Ooh, Nara is engaged! I'm geeked
8. Summer... um I love her
9. Jooheon and Changkyun are actually me with alcohol
10. Yass twins! Yass twins wearing Seokjin's dresses
11. Haebyul and Heebyul know how to game the system... Just actually go up to the bachelors lol
12. Chaelee is relatable. Falling all over the place? Me
13. "Shin Hoseok is perfection" Truer words have never been written. Maehwa, you nailed it
14. Hyunwoo being awkward and adorable and I'm in love
15. RIP Minyoung and Sara. Life isn't fair
16. Haebyul ! ! ! Ily
17. "How do you taste?" I'M L I V I N G
18. Misoon is so poetic. Pretentious, but poetic. She's like Augustus Waters
19. Kim Sook & Kihyun? Um yes please, I already ship it and can't wait to see it developed further
20. And that teaset for the next episode? I'm GAGGED (in a good way)

Anyways, this was long but I love this episode and I'm hella excited for this series. I will wait another year just to get another chapter like this. I'll try to be on time for next chapter lol
BanaWarrior
#5
Chapter 8: This season does looks like a lot different than the other one xD hahaha Like, the other one tried to seem legit till the end, this one looks like doesn't take itself that seriously anymore. Besides, all the contestants look more... dangerous? Even the average age seems a little higher too xD It's more wild (but with Juna as producer, we couldn't expect nothing different lol)
As always, it will take me a while to learn everyone's names and all, but eventually I will make it xD
And i loved this chapter really xD It's an amazing start to this new crazy house lol

About the question... Myunguk would probably stay on the vvip area and play the lady since she's already there, and since Hyungwon is there too (since he's her #1 target lol) but if she thinks going elsewhere would give her more chances, she would. It's kinda tricky because I'm not as smart as her lol
sikbbang
#6
Chapter 8: as always, i'm late on commenting... *sads*
but oH my goD i laughed so hard reading this?? i've always imagined how it would be like if you were to write a show as a fic,, and you pretty much nailed it oh my god xjxjxmd.
not sure if i'm able to keep track of the girls?? though? maybe i'm gonna pull out my pd48 girls identifying skill card to follow the flow of the story.

AND CAN I LAUGH
"how do you taste"
I A CTUALLY CANT BREATHE XNDJD tHAT QUESTION. for some reason i imagined it being beeped out or something wth ahahxksjsjs. that was so? shocking but in a good way? like i would totally want that scene to be in compilations video on youtube.

and ooh ran is starting with minhyuk *eye zooms*
why is she me

FJDJDN i want the next ep with the eng sub too pls thanks ahahahaha
iisMoMo #7
Omg this is so hilarious just what I needed for a stressful day. Thank you. I can see the difference from s1 and totally see Juna's production vibe in it, its wild! I love all the girlmance so far. This season is starting off hard I cant even guess who the hidden card night be at all unlike s1. I also know you like plot twist so I'm totally overthinking all the bachelors hahaha.

I love the the girl r wearing something from seokjin, and what Nara I'd engage!? Annnnd its wild its ep 1 and people already kissing! Hahaha n yes Hyeon would be fascinated by the lights and new life style she willl be living for a while. Hoseok is so funny what is u doin bro? Suddenly shirtless too.

Cant wait to see what happens next
luv_kero
2472 streak #8
Chapter 8: Yay, the first episode is out! :D I'm so hyped for this and regardless of how far Kyungmi gets (altho it would be amazing and very surreal if she made it to the end, haha), I'll be following this until the very last chapter to see who the Hidden Cards are. :)

I love how well you integrate the TV format into prose and it's easy to imagine the clips being shown, as if I'm watching the episode in real-time. ^^ And ooh, it looks like we're starting off at a night-club. XD I'm with Ran in not expecting this to be where the season starts, but it's a very welcome surprise and I know I'm probably not going to be able to predict anything you throw at us, if BP S1 is anything to go by. :P And it's nice to see Sara back in BP and hopefully she lasts longer than she did in S1! I also love Eunha's reference to Part of Your World from the Little Mermaid, since I'm a er for Disney films. x] And how exciting that we have Nara's business partner, Sohyun, joining this season! :D I wonder if we'll get any cameos of Nara then, especially since BP fans will know her really well. I absolutely love the teaser video and it did its job! I'M EVEN MORE HYPED, HAHA. And the rappers' introductions made me laugh the most. XD

Wow, Summer is so outgoing and I'm loving her energy. XD And ahhhhh, Kyungmi, my child!! <3 Her outfit is so her, I love it!! :D And poor girl, she's so overwhelmed by the nightclub and I don't blame her. It's probably really loud and crowded in there, and that's not very fun for someone who doesn't frequent clubs. >___< Ooh, the twins seem like they'll be very dynamic characters, so I'm excited to see more of them in future episodes. :D And nice callback to Seokjin's fashion design work! ^^ These little details really help flesh out the BP universe, haha. :) Omg, poor Chaelee already fell down on camera in the first episode. OTL She seems like she might be a bit of a mess, but I guess we'll see as the show progresses. XD And yaaaay, get that screen-time, Kyungmi!! <3 Let the celebrities live a little!! :D (even tho she does need to start being proactive if she's going to get anywhere ^^;) Baerim also seems really nice and very classy. I like her. :) And it seems like Jooheon wants to get to know her too. :D

Yessss, all hail Hyungwon, the king of memes!! *o* Omg, I love how straightforward he is, and he and Kyungmi should bond over hating clubs together. :') And I'm living for Hyunwoo being such an awkward child. XD Haha, poor Sara and Minyoung, trying but failing to get to the VVIP area. OTL I guess they give off more of a casual vibe, especially since it's just the two of them. There's power in numbers, so it's not surprising that the other five girls managed to enter without any problems. :P

Aww, Iseul seems like a sweetheart and I totally understand why she doesn't drink. Alcohol is also overrated IMO, but then again, they're in Korea which has a HUGE drinking culture. These ladies getting drunk out of their minds is no surprise, especially since they're celebrating being on the show. :P And wow, Hyungwon is A+ and I 100% agree with Sohyun's comment about him. :') And omg, I can't (yet can at the same time, bc drunk people are crazy LOOOOOL) believe Haebyul dumped a drink all over Eunha's dress. At least Eunha's too drunk to really care that it happened. XD And wait, did Haebyul just say that Hyungwon's face isn't attractive?? D: And did she just throw out the first kiss of the show?? In Episode ONE?? :O Man, she and her sister are definitely going to be throwing a bunch of curveballs in the show.

Wow, I feel like everyone is just a mess as the episode continues. ^^; Hoseok already lost his shirt and I'm very excited to read the BTS for how THAT happened, HAHA. And ooh, I'm getting the chills from Sook's introduction. She seems very no-nonsense, and I wonder how her interactions will go with the other contestants and the rest of the bachelors. And her rivalry with Kihyun seems like it'll be a big arc. :P And YES, Savage Kihyun is my everything. *o* I LOVE THE DISS.

Great first episode! :D I'm definitely ready for the rollercoaster of emotions that BP S2 will bring us and here's to hoping everyone gets their happily ever after! ^^
taekjongjin
#9
Chapter 8: I can't believe it's finally happening. Happiness galore. Looking forward to how things are going to evolve! :))
AliceReverie
#10
Chapter 8: *laughing too hard* X'D So much has happened just in ep1!?!!
The twins have confused Jooheon, someone has already tripped (and Chaelee didn't even get to meet him! D8)
"Shin Hoseok is perfection" OMG Maehwa is such a dork! XD And that bouncer calling Minyoung "kitty" what was that?
The mermaid convo... I just can't! XDDD And there's already been a KISS??!?!? (Haebyul... what did you do?! 8O)
I'm legitimately concerned for Hoseok right now ._. (what even?) And that food-pro showdown!!! YES! *need more of that*

I'll probably have to think about the question, and PM later. Anyway, I'm loving this already!! ^o^
BanaWarrior
#11
Chapter 6: Dude, this cast is Bomb. Like, almost literally xD hahahahaha I'm loving this! And thank you for choosing Goddess Myung! XD
Now i do really need to read the last chapter of Season 1 :')
AliceReverie
#12
Chapter 6: First: Thank you for picking Maehwa!!! 8D Second: Congrats to everyone else chosen!! <3
And Third: The range of personalities! XD I can tell S2 will be just as good as S1 (if not better! ^o^)
*anticipating the first chapter already*
iisMoMo #13
Chapter 6: holy crap this season is gonna be so crazy! thanks for choosing hayeon! and sara is back!!!
sikbbang
#14
Chapter 6: im yelLING my baby choi ran is chosen!!!
she's a character i am actually proud of bc i got tired of churning out super lame charas and even now i lack inspiration and motivation for new charas, it's nice to see her on the list!!
congrats to the other chosen contestants, too!!! ♡ can't wait to see the interactions between ran, the boys and all the other girls. T ___ T
taekjongjin
#15
Chapter 6: So looking forward to this ! The cast looks great. Thanks for choosing my babies. *_*
Congratulations to every chosen character ! :))
luv_kero
2472 streak #16
Chapter 6: Oh my gosh, how exciting to finally have the cast list!! :D And thank you so much for choosing Kyung Mi!! <3 I'm very excited for this season to start and I can't wait to see who'll go for which bachelor!! XD
samasbananas
#17
Chapter 6: Okay but why is Choi Ran so relatable?? Kudos to everybody who made such 10/10 interesting ladies. Can't wait to get to know them ;))))