Chapter 12: I like this story as I can imagine the dramas collide and merge as one. I hope I can survive the long breaks. Anyways, fighting. Please update sooner if you can (^_^).
Chapter 1: Interesting plot so far. I like it. Although there isn't as much action happening, I'm curious to see the next actions that the characters take. If you could possibly separate the dialogue more (When another character talks then his or her dialogue should start with a new paragraph) I think it would be a great read! Love it so far, keep up the great work!
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