Chapter 3: Ayee, there's a typo in Chapter Three. The part where Tiffany texts Jessica. You put a her instead of a him.
Coming back and re-reading this fic again, it's actually pretty refreshing.
Chapter 4: I've read the old one before. I actually finished the whole story in just two days O_O that was like 40 something chapters a day. I actually have the story downloaded on my laptop. I guess the grammar and other mistakes were bearable for me because I really liked the story. You've improved a lot author-ssi. I'm a really proud reader :)) Keep up the good work! Thanks for updating :]
Chapter 4: You may think the old version was horrible (i read it twice btw) but it had a good plot XD but this might i say is better and has gotten me hooked on it. Please update soon!
Chapter 4: I HAVE THE OLD VERSION!! THOUGH THERE ARE MISTAKES! I PRETTY LOVED IT!!!! :D But this one is better! :)) the old version is fantastic for me, especially the last chapter!!! :D And the part where you write the authors note, the note that you said you don't know how to make taeyeon escape sunny XD Cracked me up XD And you trolling me that it's now a sunyeon fanfic XD The old chapter is prett ymuch likely a bit funny, this one is the mature version :)) Anyways, update soon! The old version and new version are still the best for me! :))
Chapter 4: To be honest, i was surprised when you updated, well i really didnt expect it. And about the PDF, i'm cool with it.
Since, I really miss this story I downloaded the PDF again(i lost my first copy) before and yeah, as long as the PLOT is nice and TaeNy makes me happy, I do NOT care about the grammars and errors, so nothing to worry about ma friend lol
Just wanna let you know, I am willing to wait for this and I'll just read the pdf whenever i miss this hahaha
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