Chapter 20: oK I'M BACK AND I MIGHT OR MIGHT NOT BE CRYING. (note to self: listening to if you on loop while reading fics is not a good idea) but this was amazing - as usual, not like i expected anything less - and i'm so happy. i have so many things to say like i started crying after finding out layhan's past and especially yixing's side of the story. and then thaT TIME WHEN YIXING COULDN'T LINK WITH LUHAN AND I WAS CAUGHT BETWEEN CRYING FOR LAYHAN OR CRYING FOR HUNHAN IDK MAN. i loved your characterizations and everything and just- i legit have nO WORDS BECAUSE IT WAS TOO AMAZING. AND THAT ENDING MADE ME REALLY HAPPY AND IDK MAN I'M BURSTING WITH FEELINGS AND I JUST LOVE YOU AND YOUR WRITING STYLE SO MUCH AND THIS FIC AND EVERYTHING AND HUNHAN AND OOOP I'M CRYING AGAIN. definitely going down in my favorites (like all your other fics). also i was surprised you moved to livejournal omg. literally all my favorite authors have moved to lj now but after like at least two years with my lj account i still have no idea how to use it LOL but i seriously loved this and it wasnt as angsty as i thought it would be (thank god too. i dont think i can handle more angst and frustration after bon voyage) and it was just too good. now excuse me as i go recommend this to like all my friends now (have i mentioned that i love this fic?)
Chapter 2: ok ok ok i have a lot of things to say. first of all HI LIZ REMEMBER ME HAHA I'VE RETURNED FROM THE DEAD TO COMMENT ON YOUR FIC which leads me to my second thing, when this story was first uploaded, i was like ooooo yaaaaas another story from liz. but then it was based on soul eater and i hate being out of the loop so i was like NOOOOOO i cant read it because i wont understand anything. and then months later, me being good fic deprived found this fic again and i was like it i love liz's writing and i will read this damn thing even if i dont understand a single word. thirdly, this is so effing good already and its only the second chapter and its 1 in the morning and i probably shouldnt be up but i will read this fic from start to finish tonight i swear (i probably wont tho OTL) i cant even believe its complete and i wasnt there for like any of the ride.
anyways, heres my actual comment (sorry) YOU CANT TELL ME YIXING DIED. MY HEART WAS RIPPED TO PIECES IN LIKE THREE SENTENCES WHAT EVEN LIZ. WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO YOUR READERS DAMN and im pretty glad i dont have to watch the original soul eater to understand everything agh. (probably will end up reading/watching it after this fic tbh) anyways i'll be back in a few hours to comment again LOL
Chapter 20: I am amazed!! Amazed at how u always come up with something so different soo amazing!!hunhan has always been my favourite otp and u make me fall in love with them even more!!
Hunhan got a happy ending! What more can i ask for!!
Thankyou for this wonderful story!!
Chapter 20: Pff I am busy for a while and when I come back ITS COMPLETED! *jumps outta the window*
This was soooo beautiful really!! Especially the last chap, I was so giddy and all feely-feely cuz they both were too cute and ohgod the feels.
Only thing that confused me: did Sehun leave the next day for a year or did he just stay with Lulu?? o.o
Oh oooh and will there be a sequel?? *^*
Again: BEAUTIFUL WORK! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING!! ♡♡♡♡
*throws lots of love and glitter*
Looking forward to your next project <3
Chapter 20: Awww I'm glad
that Luhan and Sehun were
able to voice out their feelings~
But I'm also sad about LayHan,
I don't know why though because
HunHan and LayMin but I just do.
Maybe because they were such a
great couple the way you portrayed
them, and it just fell apart.
Such a great story! Thank you!
Congratulations on finishing
the fanfic~
Is this a good story? I don't know. I like it a lot. It's beautifully written. But considering I came here for that hunhan tag, I can't feel much Hunhan at the ending. Maybe you've created so big of an impression of Layhan, or maybe you've rushed Hunhan, idk. All I know is that I'm still sad about Layhan when the story ends *sob*
Chapter 20: I'm upset, my comment in lj was actually posted as anonymous. Lol so i'm reposting it here!!
Well that ends happily. and shortly as compared to BV! Ah, i was so scared when i read sehun's dumb note like bruhhh come on it's the last chapter you CANNOT DO THIS TO US! HAHA but good thing lulu caught up with him. HeHe.
“You're not late,” Luhan continues, walking towards him. “I’m not with Yixing so you’re not late. You're... early. Because i've always been…”
Sehun is looking at him like he’s seeing Luhan for the first time and Luhan holds his gaze.
“Or you know what, maybe you are too late. Because I waited.” Luhan stops himself. “No. Screw that. No one forced me to wait. I did that on my own. Which was stupid. So you're not late.”
Luhan breathes in deeply, staring into Sehun’s eyes so closely now.
“I'm not?” Sehun asks.
“You're not.” Luhan repeats. “You're early. Or yeah, maybe late. But not too late.” Luhan is holding his breath at this.
I JUST FOUND THAT SUPER CUTE WITH LUHAN BABBLING ABOUT HOW SEHUN IS LATE BUT NOT REALLY BUT YEAH HE IS. AHHHH LUHAN HYUNG PLEASE.
Chapter 20: I loved this fic so much. Idk why you decided to move it to lj tho. I'll up vote it here. I came across this fanfic when someone was famgirling about it. You really did an amazing job it was such an interesting plot and a very colourful writing style. Keep it up. I wish you could add an epilogue to this story where we see more of hunhans relationship
I really like this fic you know. To be honest I was searching for hunhan with soul eater au and, bang! I found this fic. But at first I don't think this fic would make me feel this way.
The way you describe their feelings is just so....I don't know what to say. My heart was beating so fast while I'm reading the 3 last chapter and I feel like squealling inside bcs finally these two could end up together and the last chapter really excite me ugh eventho luhn still need to wait for another year to be finally together with sehun.
Really I enjoyed reading this fic a lot and I really thank you for writing this beautiful soul eater au's hunhan♥
Chapter 20: Oh what did i say that's embarrassing.... -_-" sorry..! i just had to say those (embarrassing) things.... ! *laughing awkwardly*
once again, that was great! thankyu alot ^*^
Chapter 20: You know what? I'm reading alot of fics here, and it seems like only your fics have this thing to make me this excited! it's 7 a.m and i'm so glad that my dad is sleeping and doesn't see me talking and laughing to myself like an idiot!!!!!! THAT WAS DAEBAK~~~~ *scream out loud in my mind(don't wanna wake my dad up!!!)* These two, this idiot hunhan, their love, how beautiful you wrote it... I don't even know how could i live without this in past few weeks~~! :D
Ok.. i'm still laughing and i have know idea what i'm saying right now so... ILOVEDIT ILOVEYOU THANKYUUUU~~~~~ <33333
Chapter 20: This is one of the greatest fics ever. Your writing is what I look forward to every week and I honestly can't describe the weird feeling I had in my belly whilst reading the last chapter, I nearly cried I was so happy! I'm so glad everything worked out (BIG THUMBS UP FOR XIULAY YESSS) and I just wanted to say a huge thank you for sharing this amazing story with us!! Whatever you plan on writing next, I'll definitely be reading it :)
Chapter 20: Awwwwwwwwwwwww sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeet . Looooooooove the story and the ending is .argh .so sweet . Congratulations on completing the story . I really enjoyed reading it . ^.^
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