Chapter 34: *spoilers8* okaaay ... I don't care about the grammatical and spelling mistakes or even the repetition of the same word in the beginning and ending of the same sentence. However, if the story was fantasy or extreme comedy I would have understood the male "pregnancy" but, it isn't!!!
How can I enjoy the story while this ridiculous event keeps destroying my imagination of the story >.<
Also, you don't give an important moment it's time and instead you end it quickly and abruptly like for example the event where Jong In bid on Kyung Soo. Was there even a for KaiSoo? how did you not write one for them T_T
the original idea was very promising but I think you rushed it and a result it wasn't as a great as it should have been >.<
Chapter 34: THIS STORY IS SO DAMN GOOD DAYUM BUT Im kinda confused bec you first wrote that hunhan met in a train? Then they met in an ice cream parlor lmao
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