Chapter 30: Ok umm. This was supposed to be Kris and Jaemin but I don't like this... Why she making out with Jiyomg for.. Like I thought she had some kind of feeling for Kris ...
Chapter 1: I've only read the first chapter and I can not continue due to the placing of Korean words in the story. You are writing this story in English yet use words like arasso neh andwae pali ect. This is, honestly, a huge turn off for many readers. Its like the story can not be taken seriously at all and like the characters are trying to be cutesy when it's not like that at all. I know this may be your writing style and that many people are fine reading like this, but as a fellow author, I know it's important to get feedback from readers, and this is opinion. No offense to you or readers who enjoy your story.
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