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BaekYeolFan_ #1
Chapter 14: Omg that ending </3 my poor heart
BaekYeolFan_ #2
Chapter 13: Princess *wiggle eyebrows*
I love the relationships but how taoris interact is just the best
BaekYeolFan_ #3
Chapter 6: Oh that sulay <3 and poor kai an sehun...
shishijiejie #4
Chapter 36: When my sister recommended this story to me, I thought to myself "why not? I have nothing better to do" (well not entirely true, but anyhow). I just read the first chapter and the story got me hooked. It truly is a Great Story (notice the capitals). The feelings in this story were something so simple, but at the same time complicated. It was a situation we knew, but at the same time a situation we cannot entirely relate to. How could we? We were never forbidden to date someone, we were never chased by crazy fans, we weren't publicly scrutinised all over the world for our ual orientation. At this point, I would like to thank you, author-nim, to have written such an amazing story, no such a Great Story. It was really compelling how you could, as a reader, follow the idols point of view and compare it to the companies point of view. Also the different reactions of the fans were really on point (which is somehow really sad). Through this story you could really see that there are many different facettes to a situation and that there usually isn't just one side in the wrong. Here both parties are not entirely wrong (they both have their reasons to act that way), they just don't work well together. We could read it here and also see it in the situation we all know so well.
Thank you author-nim for this Great Story & thank you little sister for recommending it to me.
ao-Miku
#5
Chapter 32: OMG Why does it even have to come to an end ?!
Thank you for this story, I really enjoyed the whole scenario but I couldn't help but cry
The way you explained the feelings of each of the characters is so earnest jinja
Thanks again for writing such a mouving story and fighting ♥
happen #6
Chapter 7: new reader here
yini_666 #7
Chapter 36: Amazing. I just loved the way you portrayed all of them, (especially tao XD) thank you so much for writing this :')
Avila13
#8
Chapter 36: This is one of the best stories i've read so far. thank you for writing it and keep going ^^
kekekexo
#9
Chapter 32: SOOLAID IM CRYING SO JARD I LOVE SULAY WJAHAOANOQNSKSMDJSOWMJWOWKWKEKE WHY WHY WHY WHY SULAY WAS SO GOOD IN THIS
drumyeols
#10
Chapter 35: AUTHOR NIMMM!!! THIS STORY IS VERY BEAUTIFUL AND ITS JSBDHSBSHSBSHHSHSGS THANK YOU FO WRITING THIS GREAT STORY!!!
exotic_army_love #11
This whole story was just mindblowing. I really enjoyed this fic and you're such an amazing writer... keep writing! ^^
Cheekobooie #12
Chapter 32: I love this. This is the greatest fanfic. This should be the exo-L fanfic. I loved Yixing's acknowledgment most.... u r a genius!!! Please continue writing..
izumiakazawa #13
Chapter 32: aww its beautiful ♥♥♥♥♥♡♡♡
can't express any other word, but AMAIZING!!!♡♥
love your writing style so much...

i love the porcelain doll ...the most♥♥♥ tough^^..

i love all your stories.. yeah indeed♡♡♥♥
birthstone #14
beautiful storrryy <3 <3
Nadianrrfh
#15
Chapter 31: Beautiful.
sehunoppaaaaaa #16
this story is okay I guess
yukina15 #17
Chapter 36: OMO I'm literally in tears from sadness and happiness. Thank you for writing this. The fandom needed this. You pulled in great issues with the industry: the untreated injuries; no rest/breaks; the lack of freedom. But by showing the side of the company, the idols, and the fan you captured how sometimes in life there are no white knights or villains. Just people doing the best they can in the situation and I think some fans really need to be reminded of that. I loved the ending with Kris walking baekhyun down the aisle and everyone being together again. It's my not so secret wish. I don't care if OT12 never takes the stage as a group, I just want to see them all together hanging out. I'm sorry, but I will never believe that they weren't truly brothers.

About the writing: I loved that you framed this story as Yixing being an author narrating his search for the "great story". A writer writing about a writer writing. It's so meta, I love it! This is the type of story where you could pull an E.L. James and rework it from fanfiction to mainstream literature. Just change names, remove obvious K-pop references, edit to smooth out some minor grammar/spelling errors, and maybe change a few genders (mainstream YA fiction seem to like a few gay couples in a story but too many and people start freaking out). It's a story that can appeal to mainstream audiences, not just EXO or K-pop fans. It's a great depiction of how messy life is. How we want to have it all but it's just not possible and making choices hurts. And you hit the nail on the head with your insight into why people join fandoms be it bands, tv shows, or sports team-people just want to belong to something bigger than themselves. And we do care, we always care. We hate change. I love how the end is so bittersweet because change (even good change) is bittersweet and hard to accept. Are you a psych major cause your insight into the human psyche is great!
Damina66
#18
THIS WAS SO AWESOME /CRIES/ I LOVE IT AND I DON'T CARE ABOUT MY ROOMMATE BECAUSE I SIT IN FRONT OF MY COMPUTER CRYING... THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS!! I HAVEN'T FOUND MY GREAT STORY YET BUT I HOPE YOU HAVE FOUND YOURS!!!!!