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magiclarp #1
Chapter 10: i'm rereading this for the umpteenth time and how could i forget this little a/n side story omg i'm dying it's soo good
eternityexo #2
Chapter 41: Author-nim this is one of the best well written stories I've ever read! I really love it, how each characters has their own point of view and screen time in the story hehe xD And how they all formed bonds and friendship just like the HSC team :) Its amazing and cute >< Once again thank you for this cute rollercoaster ride story!! I'm glad you get featured and many people know ur amazing story! I hope you have a nice day author-nim! C:
huehuehue #3
Chapter 23: HAHAHAHAHA omg i love kris' character lmao
yunasbowtie
#4
Chapter 41: Ahh it's so nice to reread this :D so much feels now after having been in uni~ I WANT A PROFESSOR LIKE HER but no.
Hopefully all has been well with you too!! <33
Lilium1
#5
Chapter 2: Well I mean, he's right lol.
Nerdsnerdsnerds
#6
Chapter 41: Aaaw! This was a really cute story. I finished it in one sitting! I do wish that the relationship between Hana and Kai were fleshed out more so you can see the dynamics of their paring. Although, twisting it up and making Suho the tortured and twisted soul was aawweesooommee! Thanks also for the recommendations! These will help fuel the fire of my KPop life!
Sophora91 #7
Chapter 23: This story is nice, but also I have to say that this story don't have soul, we need more feelings.
yehorat-hun1 #8
Chapter 41: Hi new reader here! I'm sorry authornim but I had to say this. I agreed with nsn_sabrina0411. I feel like unsatisfied reading your story. I never said your story is bad but I'm just being honest here. Please forgive me and keep writing authornim, because practice makes perfect ^^
kiarrahmah #9
Chapter 42: I ABSO-BLOODY-LUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!
Cannot complain about anything. The pace is good, not too fast or too slow, it's just right! The way you revealed each characters background story is marvelous! I'm glad I found this story. Have a good time ^^
1Camborean
#10
Chapter 41: The illuminati joke gets me every time! I just love the relationship between Hana and Kai!
ccjial #11
Chapter 42: oh am geeee....this story was so awsome! read it in one go!! thank you authornim!!! 사랑해!!
BeautyMelodyx
#12
Chapter 41: It is already my third time reading this and I guess I will never get sick of it.
Mimimimmimim #13
Chapter 41: I can't believe I actuallfinished a forty chaptered fanfic in less that twelve hoyrs it's truly astonishing. I really loved the plot and all the small plot twists and differebt pasts of every individual. Kai's dad is messed up though like it was all a test?????? What???? And yet, I'm angrier at Hana's parents because their actions weren't even good intentions. It was all out if greed and since sehun couldn't offer anything , they neglected him. Thank you for writing this story and I'm lucky to have stumbled upon it
callmesabby
#14
Chapter 42: Hi.I'm a new reader here. Sorry beforehand as I would like to put some comments on this story. I hope you wouldn't be offended, authornim. It is just some honest words from the bottom of my heart.

It is a good idea to come out with a genius girl who becomes a lecturer at the age of 19 and end up with her 2 years older student who is also her oppa's buddy.

And also when you describe her depression despite having all the attentions..and also when Jun Myeon has a multiple personalities (I luv it!).

However,truthfully, I do feel something is missing here. Like...erm..how do I say this? Er... Like the story suddenly jumped down the hill after almost being at the peak of its ? I can't say that I didn't enjoy the story at all, but I can't also say that I'm satisfied. I was hoping for more,but it looks like there are holes somewhere.

And I wish you can take my comments without any offence.^^

I wish you a good luck then!

Sincerely,
Your reader
UltraShawol
#15
Chapter 41: That was such a good fanfic x good job author-nim! And the story wrapped up so well~

♡♡♡hwaiting!