You know what? This story is my favourite.seriously. i will wait patiently for your update. Please, just please don't abandon this story i literally cry if you do that . Fighthing ! ♡♡♡
Chapter 61: I too feel sorry for getting closer to the end as you say but I want an update too! And I think Monster would definitely waken up some inspiration in you huh :D
Chapter 61: New subscriber~ I'm completely mind blown. This story is really really great and I legit felt like I was there, as one of the students in the school experiencing everything. I really love the way you write the story and the amazing characterization. The suspense and thrill of the last few chapters really got to me and I can't wait for your update. I feel like i'm blabbering now so... Im out. Hwaiting! ^-^
Chapter 61: This story is seriously so good! I just started reading today, and have already read the whole thing so far. I literally couldn't stop. You're a great writer, and it's a unique idea. Please never stop writing, because that would just be a tragedy. Just thought I should tell you how much I love the story and appreciate your work!
Chapter 61: Please, don't ever take this story off. It's honest to god my favourite story on this site and I read it every few weeks from beginning to end
Chapter 61: Hi.
Yknow what's on my mind when i watch exo's monster mv..? This story.
Just wow! Probably someone from SM read this fic and then inspired ^^
Chapter 61: I can't even think properly if I haven't eat anything for a day. It was nice to see their loyalness to Taehyuk, and to know that Taehyuk is a very kind guy depsite all his nonsense acts.
Honestly, I feel a bit sympathy to Juyeon. It is hard enough not to freak out after all those crap, it's feels nice to let the cry out. I'm also a bit curious about her mom's story, but it can be saved for later, I thinn.
Lastly, I'll be waiting for this story's update :) I'm not forcing you, not at all. I know it to be under pressure. You have all the time in the world to finish it, hope the best for all of them and thank you for making such a nice story to read! :))
Chapter 61: So first of all, hello. I'm a new reader who subscribed to this story since long time ago, I don't even realize that I've subscribed to it if my friend didn't give me this link and there's already subscribed tags. You see, I'm usually not a type of person who leaves comment here. I'm a type of person who recommended it in my recommendation page (I am from Indonesia and my recs pages is wordpress, I can give it to you if you want :) but I write it in Indonesian) I am thinking about put your story in my recommendation list in my next update anyway! :)
So for the starter, I am currently studying medicine and, gosh, I know how ed up sickle cell can be. And to imagine someone died in a tunnel because of it just feels so.... inhumanly cruel. So you see, I'm not sure what I need to write right now. I've just finished read The Problem Children in straight 2 days. I don't even have a bit regret about staying up all night just to finish half of it. I don't know, I think I'm a bit too immersed in the story and know it feels like empty knowing that it stops in this chapter. My brain just can't stop it you know, to think about all the possibilities about how their future might be.
I'm so impressed with your writing style. Honestly, I don't even realize since when did Juyeon become so....you know, tolerate EXO and all the bullcrap they've been done. Such a nice improvements of their characters and all their conversations are packed nicely, with a tint of sarcasm that feels so right all over the place. I don't know, maybe after the GTA's attack it feels like my brain drained a bit too. To think about being a leader for such large amounts of supernatural-kid is a thing, and to think that Juyeon is just a 'normie' is another thing.
I hope all the best for all of them, I sincerely do. Such a kind act that Yuri choose to do, to sacrifice themselves for others' good. I can't even think how messed up their brain might be, not eating anything for 15 days straight.
Chapter 55: That moment when everything seems to be going hay wards and then BAM GET YOUR S**T TOGETHER PEOPLE, ITS TIME TO ACT BADASS!!!!HELL YEAH!!!!!!
Just another thing that I've forgotten to add, but must say; when DO pointed out the flowers, I couldn't help but imagine the burying ceremony at the end of the battle when they will be forced to carry the fallen bodies of their fellow brothers. It also made me realise that for them, there's no greater honour than to die in war, protecting something. Because that's all they have left--protection. They barely have any real, tangible goals in life, not because they can't, but because the option was never given, and sacrificing themselves, while using their powers, to show their loyalty, to ensure somebody's safety is the best thing they can achieve in their lives, the best way to end their journey, and it's sad. It's sad because they are literally learning and preparing themselves for the moment they die. Not for life, or for great moments to remember or goals, but to find ways to die in a way that won't bring shame to their name. Dog tags, something to be remembered by, is the only thing they can hope for. I hope, truly hope, that Yuri and the others will be saved, that they will survive, that no blood will be shed for the wrong reasons.
Chapter 61: And this last, scene, God. Despite the environment they were in and the injuries obtained throughout the chapters, you never truly realise how much of a matter of life and death every fight is. You don't really see them as war weapons or soldiers meant for sacrifice, until now. Sure, it's been mentioned but now, with Taehyuk's group sacrificing themselves and fighting on the front line, throwing their pins at the rest as a confirmation that their face has been accepted, truly makes you realise how cruel and barbaric their entire lives are, in the end. They were still young, and in less than a chapter, you came to care about Yuri. It pains me to know that such a young person had to die so early at the ends of a war not started by them. And out of loyalty, out of friendship and out of the realisation that it's for the greater good. You come to realise that when high school ends, this is the fate most of the PC are going to face as the government's toys. I swear, if this is an elaborate test made by the teachers, if lives were truly lost (with the exception of the student found in the sewers), then a rebellion better happen, because this is just cruel.
Chapter 61: I think this is not only the undoubtedly the best Exo harem story out there, but one of the best stories out there featuring OCs. From the plot, to the slowly building-up tension, to the way certain issues were dealt with, to just--everything. Too much has happened for me to talk about every single moment, but I have a few in mind. Juyeon's character development, organic relationships with the EXO members, and really, all those characters that make more than just a brief appearance throughout the story. She had her flaws, some we can name the moment we see her name, but can hardly still accuse her of having them any more. She still has some old habits and succumbs to her flaws, but not as much as before. She is, really, a well-done, taken care of and carefully woven in main female character. Another thing that I have to mention is how she was never written out to be above the other females who were more interested in love and makeup and boys. She was painted as being different, but not necessarily better. The groupies were never written as horrible people with flaws they could never truly repent for. The Valentine's scene in the kitchen was also one I hold dear to my heart as the girl-on-girl hate trope is too frequent in stories, and, all together, toxic for easily impressed readers. Good job with that. Another thing you absolutely aced was building bridges between Exo and the main character, integrating her in the group without taking any of their character traits away without a good reason. They haven't gotten together, obviously, and the main is still unsure of the nature of her feelings towards them, but they work just fine together. Although the question she raised about morals and ethics made them go in-depth about their choices, they are still trained soldiers and depend heavily on their animal instincts. They now make better decisions, sure, but the accent mark is still put on their strengths and power.
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