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andk1000
#1
Chapter 31: Do you know how complicated this story yet you make it looks smooth and really love it? I like the way you develop main characters but not ignore another point of view. Greatttt! I think you're one of my favorite author <33
love_toread #2
Chapter 30: oh my god! oh my god!!! this story really the best! it's always give me the emotion. and the plottwist was seriously amazing!! you are really an amazing author, authornim! thanks for this story! i really love it
skepticqueen
#3
this is by far, THE BEST Wu Yifan FF romance eveeeer! i cannot describe how i love the way u write the plot. and i do feel the same about ur author note on chap 27. every single word u wrote there, i feel exactly the same :(
but anyway, at least now i feel a little bit happy with his career progress in China. but sometimes, i still cant helped being sad when i saw news about the rest of the boys. hey, i think i want to befriend with u in real world. not just only here, if u dont mind ofc :)
Luloverdose #4
Chapter 30: This is a complete thriller...kkkkk
I love Kris!!!!
Luloverdose #5
Chapter 4: I really love the way you described Kris's feeling toward Soojin. I simply love every word you wrote there. I could imagine well how he loved her so much and how hard he tried to deny it.. ♥
dobixx #6
Chapter 31: this story is teach everyone to see what the real meaning of 'true love'. And i think you'll probably be one of my fav author. Good job authornim
blackpotato #7
I really love you story, and I'm really satisfied with the end of the story. Everyone happy, include me.. *two thumbs up for you*
hellollyn
#8
what a great story you have and i admire this so much. u make me feel the pain till i cant stop my tears falling. and i was just want to kill park chanyeol this instant for being a selfish jerk. but i also want to slap kris and soojin for being so idiot.
thank u for bringing this beautiful story :)
BarbieQue #9
Chapter 30: i thought this has a pdf version? why can't i find it T.T huhu author nim i really want to read this but i'm busy at school so if its okay may i request for a pdf file so i can read it during my free times at school or with on the road <3<3
domikado #10
Chapter 31: everything was complicated but I'm glad they ended together. i love how you describe the feelings of them its really great !!
oviahara #11
Chapter 30: gosh ! your story was awesome !!!! i love how you write those words perfectly ! really meaningful to me !
its like i'm the one who gone through with this sadness, despair, longing for someone, happiness ..it's all in one !
you are a good writer ! thumbs up 4 u authornim !!
alyxfatale
#12
Chapter 31: I finished reading in two days. It's like a drug seriously. I couldn't stop reading it, it just kept dragging me into reading it without stopping. Great job, author-nim! The ending was cute though XD
Carolines
#13
Chapter 30: this is the best story i've ever read seriously T__T
the story is so beautiful T_T
i'm so glad that she ended with yifan ♥
i love sehun and soorin too! they are so cute XD
really nice work! thank you very much! T_T
MisaPanda #14
Chapter 13: So far the story is really good and I keep on wanting to read more.
Though there are quiet a few grammatical errors that bother me. Most of which is using present tense words instead of past tense. It's not incredibly annoying but it is quite distracting sometimes.
Other than that the story is pretty good and I can't wait to read more ^.^
heera15
#15
Chapter 31: I must say that this is a really great story. And there are so many plot twist in this story but that just make the story greater. And the fact that kris and sehun is main bias and main character for this story make me feel....mlove the story even more. Srsly, i kind of regret why dont i read this story earlier but anyway this is really great.
I somehow guessed that soojin doesnt really dead because it was just too much too read hahahaha
And you make Kris such a....really great man and so is sehun. Cant help but thank you for tge really beautiful story!
Triple_L #16
Chapter 31: I spent a day reading this story... Word by word. To be honest, every single word is very beautiful... I learn alot through this story.
Seriously... This is one of the best story i ve read so far and you really did a great work. ;))

Nice work you did here! Keep up your good work and good luck! Hwaiting!!!
FarQin
#17
Chapter 31: You know what.. This story is sooo me.. I love him.. But he never love me back.. So i realised i should move on for a little bit.. So i could forget him.. I have forgotten him but to see him in the same class everyday.. Make me cannot forget him.. But the feeling has gone little by little.. So i believe i can move on!!! Your story is really inspiring me
wintersummer15 #18
this story is wayyyyy too sweettt~~~
pbcccc #19
Chapter 31: can we have a soorin&sehun sequel =]??? pretty please
gab_gabriellaa
#20
Chapter 30: Ohmygodness this fanfict tell about fate who realy like to play with love destination.
I'm very happy because finaly soojin can open her eyes aaaa
Nice fanfic, author
Keep writing (งˆ▽ˆ)ง