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parkeunbi
#1
Pls make another sehunnnnn fanfic omggg u r the best authornim♥♥♥♥ uri sehunnie is just so daebak here
1220cjh #2
Chapter 32: Ahn soo jin should be in a great pain. If i were her, i might cry in the same time.seriously i feel the pain sensation when sehun said "i do"
1220cjh #3
Chapter 31: Is that a real chat of exo member? I havent seen it yet until now so thankyou~ but i still got confused ith the purpose of their chat lol
1220cjh #4
Chapter 10: Chapter 10: sehun was so manly i cant hold ><
1220cjh #5
Chapter 3: Btw choi jaehyun is my lil bro's name LOL forget it
1220cjh #6
Chapter 3: Three months is quiet short term i think LOL
Btw this is so cool. I was wondering if you are in indonesian. Are you?
rahil_yura #7
Chapter 13: This story getting more interesting...love it
Akokbatarep #8
Chapter 45: I've read this story 2 times and it's still my favourite story.great job!!!
love_dks
#9
Chapter 14: I thank you for writing this story. Hopefully I'll finish it soon! I plan on reading more of your stories! Keep being a wonderful writer!

xx
ufanabila #10
interesting, just now i read the foreword and hope sehun hear the challenge, what will he do if he know?
OppaJjang98 #11
Chapter 45: Omg !!!!! I love this story!!!!! It was... Just Perfect!!!! I really like the end!;)
kevinswife4ever #12
Chapter 45: Ugvvb i loved this and im sad that it ended ;( but ill see u in ur other stories right :) and no i wont unsubscribe cuz i luv u~~
Babyjojo
#13
Chapter 45: Omg!! I love love love this story!!!!! I really enjoy reading it!!! It's like one of the best story that I've read!!!!!!!! I'll keep reading all your stories!!!! Fighting!!!
wintermagician #14
I just wanted to say, this is probably my favorite story that I've read so far! :) It was really well written, and I really enjoyed reading it. ^_^ I can't wait to read more of your work!
lovetreasures #15
Chapter 45: Oh my god finally done reading and i must say this story is really worth reading! The character development is well done! However just a minor complain here because i got really pissed how soojin never learn from her mistakes and still often go out late at night alone despite being so attractive to rapists! Also, sehun seemed to always know where soojin is and will become the hero of the day. So i seriously wondered if he really did stalk her everywhere she go. Nevertheless, THANK YOU AUTHOR-NIM FOR YOUR AWESOME BITTERSWEET STORY <3
songthao
#16
Chapter 45: i think i have fallen in love with sehun while reading this but idk i can never stop thinking about the others huh why are these 12 dude(even thought some are not this story) so handsome cute derpy and hot they will be the death of me
EXOtic364 #17
Chapter 45: Whoaa author nim that was the best Sehun&OC story ive read! I really like your writing style and diction so great job! Quick question: (did something happen between them in bed after they finally made up?) *im such a byuntae. ;)
wanyuan #18
Chapter 45: Omg this story is awesome.. Scratch that, it's wayyyy beyond awesome.. I'm gonna read your other fanfics ;) thanks for writing sucha great piece of work :)
crystal0326
#19
Chapter 45: Ah!~ Such a cute story!~ I was bwalling when the grandpa died... I guess I hace a vey soft spot for old people!~Lol
Rahma_daragon #20
Chapter 4: Ohmygod! This girl is not stupid at all! Reading it and I was like 'woah! How can she think about that?:o'
Rahma_daragon #21
New reader here :) I think it'll be fun :D
daeljoejinyoung96 #22
Chapter 45: i really love this story. this story was so beautiful... im in love with this. thanks for this storyyy.
joonmyun_SUHO
#23
Chapter 45: This story is so good! Just that Soo Jin so too dumb
joonmyun_SUHO
#24
Chapter 38: I hate Soo Jin for believing Yoo Ra even though Sehun save her a lot of time already
fyeahleetaemin
#25
Chapter 45: OMG, I'm so in love with this story SOBSSSSS Se Hun and Soo Jin are so sweet omg DIABETES. HAHAH Anyway, Sehun loves soojin so much omg asdfghjkl <3 Altho I would have liked if there was more about after they started dating officially! Heh. They would be so cute omg and ahh all the times they spent together are SUPER CUTE OMGAH. Sehun always calling soojin his girlfriend even before they got together omggg Spazz spazz hahahaha Lovely job with the story!!!! SARANGHAE AUTHORNIM <3
Lori_lori #26
Chapter 45: I fall in love with this story !!! upvote !!! ♡♡ :D (y)
authornim_E
#27
Chapter 45: This was so cute!!! I loved it!!!!!
Lori_lori #28
Chapter 44: I really like this chapter
nonohan #29
Chapter 26: selca >3< oh myyyyyy God XD i could die
authornim_E
#30
Chapter 32: No!!!!!! He still likes her. I don't blame him first love really never dies.
princesspchan
#31
Chapter 45: //cries//
probz the best shun stories I've read omg
ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT! thanks for writing such an amazing story, author-nim ^^
waiting to see more great works from you :)
Well, off to read Goodbye Autumn now~ LOL
authornim_E
#32
Chapter 26: A selfie with sehunnie!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Omg!!!!!!!!! I swear knowing me I would've dropped the phone in excitement lol
authornim_E
#33
Chapter 14: Now I'm sobbing too. Damnit!!!!!!
authornim_E
#34
Chapter 13: Oh my god squeals in heaven because this was te cutest chapter ever and I swear I just woke everyone in the whole neighborhood.
Loveviviann #35
Chapter 45: I finish this fanfic in one day .. THE FEEELLLSSSS !! I LOVE EVERYTHING AND EVERY PART OF THIS STORY !!!!!
Prom15e_13elieve
#36
Chapter 45: Omg i love this ♥♡
Honestly this fic should be turn into a drama. Like for realzzz haha
Awhh i want a gangsta like sehunnie. Such a bad boy. Haha or even choi jaehyun, i love his character too.
jackieness #37
Chapter 45: Omygoshh....*cannot contain ma feels~

Lalalala~ ☆ you make me tiiiingle tingle!

Lets just say that you may or may not have changed my exo bias...
예헷!!

오호랏!!!

..~but i hate you~....

I hate you because even though its my exam period, youve gotten me staying up til 3am for the past few nights just killing my eyes staring at my phone in the darkness.

..~but i love you~...

Haha anyway thanks for writing such a cute story for all of us.! I hope that you keep writing in the future and even if you dont post them, that you enjoy writing and that it means something to you.

And lastly, 엑소 사랑하자!!!!!
sojongined01
#38
Chapter 45: I LOVED everything! Gosh, everything is just so good! This is the first Sehun story I finished. Thank you so much for such a beautiful story. I seriously cried so much because of this story. Thank you!
Loveviviann #39
Chapter 4: Im only on ch 4 and im already in LOVE with it !!! Gahhh , its soooo goodd
kookie_04 #40
LOVE LOVE LVOE THISSS BUT HOLY SHIET SHE GETS INTO SO MUCH TROUBLE IM LAUGHING. BUT IT MAKES THIS STORY THAT MUCH BETTER THANK YOU AUTHORNIM
sevenineLu #41
i finished reading this just one day.... kekeke
Sunzy12
#42
Chapter 45: WOOHOO! Finally i finished reading your story. Definitely one of my favorite fanfiction out there. Please make a lot of sehun fics because it's sk hard to find sehun fiction and this fic turned out to be one of my fav ever! Keep up your work nice job authornim <3
mrsjgb
#43
Chapter 45: wow!!!! amazing story author nim~~~~ reading this all night,and cant sleep coz thinking their sweet moments! my roomates thought im going crazy..hahaha..at first,i thought soo jin was so annoying,coz she always attracts ets and yeah i could tell she's an unlucky girl,but when sehun is always there whenever she got into trouble,made me realize that she actually the luckiest girl..who wouldnt want sehun to save you? heeee..and her denial stage towards the end of the story also makes me irritated..but then,she's very much has no experience in love,so..cant blame her..overall,its an amazing story! i like it!!
thank u author nim~~~ please write lots of stories in the future! fighting :D
laila_fiza
#44
Chapter 45: woah!just finished read your fanfic.
look like i have occupied my mind with your great fanfic!
it was super duper awesome~
yehet!
xxsnowflakes
#45
Chapter 13: Fav chapter ❤❤❤ KILL ME NOWWW
iwannalivefortoday #46
Chapter 45: Woahh it's been a long time since I've read a whole story at one go. I reaaaally enjoyed the story.
I have to say that sometimes I got frustrated because I really couldn't understand Sehun feelings and when YooRa appeared in the picture it confused me even more. What I mean is that I could sense that he wasn't just a random prince charming saving all the time the princess Soojin, but one time he was kissing her, another time he's telling her to not fall in love with him. Is it because he just said those three magical words only at the end? Only then I was able to confirm it hahaha. Also when he said that he still liked YooRa I thought "oh gosh, maybe he really doesn't like Soojin to that extent and she will end up friendzoned while he'll be back somehow with the ex" XP

Anyway, thanks for this wonderful and cute story ^~^
Tiffwan #47
Chapter 45: This is a great story. Thankyou author-nim. The way you portrayed Sehun (omg, I love him) was really creative.
thejungs #48
Chapter 45: I like this story so much! Sehun is so so i dont know what to say. Gawd my feels for Sehun!!!
sondoshany143
#49
Chapter 41: you are just stupid soo jin you know that, i'm about to hit you, ugh, can't you just accept his heart
byunseyeol #50
Chapter 4: Soo jin was insanely smart! Wow i'm impressed! I wish I could be as smart as her
DD_DoubleD #51
Chapter 45: I should be learning. But here I am, reading your awesome story in just the shortest time possible.
Good job!
Grimmy
#52
Chapter 45: This story is beautiful :D <3
You had me on an emotional roller coaster in almost every chapter. Keep up the great work (Y)
intan_64 #53
Chapter 45: Love it...keep it up author-nim...<3 <3 <3
derpyomgyeol
#54
Chapter 3: I love it when you use 'stab me with a straw'
That's kawaii :3
pandragon #55
Chapter 45: I'm liking sehun more now!
Teacupsshi
#56
Chapter 45: The story was good authornim!~ I finished the story in two days while I actually should be studying haahhahaha, but like I said I enjoyed it, but I was getting sick of all the molesters because there wasn't any variation, and wasn't Soo Jin a little too perfect? hahahah anyhow I really enjoyed it, and the drama surrounding Yoo Ra was so fun to read, omfg I sound like a sadistic person, sorry for liking drama! ; - ; anyhow I loved the happy ending, even though it was a pretty cliché one, sometimes cliché is good hahahah, oh and I loved how you just casually put some subtle BaekYeol in the story xDD <3
slowhead #57
Chapter 45: One of the best stories I've read so far :)
SehunnieXD #58
Chapter 45: That's it? :(((((
SehunnieXD #59
Chapter 19: Wth that was dic=Fic* sorry :O sorry
SehunnieXD #60
Chapter 19: Wha hahah I think you shoild name your dic Stupid Gangster Kid instead haha its always at the end of the chapters
Alexthekpoplover #61
Chapter 3: Awesome the best you are a great writer
LuluLay
#62
Chapter 45: I can't believe it's already the end....i just cannot...i want more :( the end reminded me of the heirs and also how sehun always gets involved into fights like kim tan lololol but anyways i really enjoyed reading this and i guess i am also in denial...that sehun is my bias now, i mean i find myself fangirling more over him and my backround is sehun for a while...but still i cannot accept this XDDDDD yes i will keep denying it lol even though i finished this. I still want to subscribe so i won't forget what an amazing story i've read :D it's almost 3am and i have to get up at 8 so good night !
LuluLay
#63
Chapter 41: Can i...can i just fckin slap soo jin gaawwwd this girl how dare she be so stupid and hurt my sehun twice...she really needs a good slap to wake her up
sehunxexoo #64
Chapter 45: Took me two days to finish when I found out about this story.. Lol. I decided to take the challenge to read all of the chapters ;-; *slams you againts the wall* omigawds but thank you for making such an awesome story :3

But I do love reading your Goodbye Autumn. Hope you update that story soon ^^ Hwaiting
LuluLay
#65
Chapter 13: Kyyyaaah fangirling so hard right now BWHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA well she might haven't fall for you sehun BUT I ALREADY FELL FOR YOU FML HAHAHAHA goodness authornim i hate you so much ! Thanks to you i am even more in love with this maknae T_T (i am sorry luhan stay strong and keep your position) but gawd that gangster kid is just too hot i also cannot understand while the girls weren't drooling over him lol
LuluLay
#66
Chapter 10: So i am a new reader here...and i found myself searching for sehun fanfics even though luhan is my ultimate bias...but sehun...ARHGG HATR THIS FCKIN BIAS LIST RUINER !!!and omg HE IS THE HOTTEST GANGSTA HAHAHAHAHHA i wanted to comment after finishing this fanfic but goodness sehun just had to wear a suit gaawwd even just by reading this i am totally fangirling inside BWHAHAHAHAHHA that ty bias list ruiner -.- why u so super hot/handsome lately...someone call the doctor sehun just cannot push luhan away hahaha
Jazzelle
#67
Chapter 45: i finished ur story in 1 day! (actually in a few hours hehe) though i was a lil irritated that soo jin kept gettin in trouble bt like u said "who is soo jin without any trouble?" hehe I love the story a lot and thank you so much for writing! :)) i wont unsubscribe cz i would wana read back stories that i love someday in future :)
HoneyBubble
#68
Oh god author nim I just spent the while day reading your fic ! <3 absolutely loved it ^^ thanks for making this wonderful story
SyaEXO88 #69
Chapter 45: Its awesome author-nim! Jjang!
Kaioverdose #70
Chapter 2: I can feel what ahn soo jin feel.. humiliated!!! *scream at the top of my lungs!!!!!*
gorgeousayee #71
Chapter 45: I LOVE THIS STORY!! every chapter gives fluters
Half-BloodPrincess
#72
Chapter 45: I read this story for one whole night ignoring the sleepiness that is slowly creeping into my eyes because this story is just so addicting. I just love SeJin couple so much ㅠㅠ and congrats for getting featured. This story deserves it ;)
MissOrange
#73
Chapter 45: congrats for the future!! (i know im a slowpoke lmao)
i wanted to post a comment for every chapter but it's just.........
IT DIDN'T GIVE ME THE TIME TO POST A COMMENT BECAUSE EVERY CHAPTER IS SOOOOOOOOO COOL.
you give me this mysterious feeling in wanting to know what's going to happen even if this story is not a fluff.
It's much more to dramas (which i don't really like) but u made me like it!
and you made me laugh too, here and there. I just love this story!
I keep on thinking about it that I didn't even sleep reading this (only earning a bad luck by getting up in the next night) I regret it, but i didn't regret reading this story.
and guess what, i regret it again because it's morning like almost 4am already. I BLAME YOU.
but nahhhh, i take it back because the way u write this story is just precious! there are some wrong spellings here and there but it's still acceptable and didn't annoy me that much, because your grammars are quiet great (not that im judging or anything)
and this is the first time, i comment this much for a story. If i meet you in real life, i bet i would blabber and u're the one who would get annoyed with me, but heck! who cares.
I love you 101861(?) IT'S A GUESS.
wait lemme check..
dang it, i wrongly put it. Forgive me.
and it's not that always i read author's name keke~ your username is quiet unique, 181061 ^^
I just got it wrong a little, don't get mad okay. I love you! and you're making me love Oh Sehun T-T
Queen_EeFamaBexX
#74
Chapter 45: Finally i have finished reeading it. This story is daebak!! My favorute story! Jjang
Donghae_Hongki
#75
Chapter 45: This story is really great!!! It's really addicting and it makes me curious all the time what's gonna happen in the next chapter! GREAT JOB :)
dukkuu
#76
Chapter 45: thank you for that great stir author-nim ^^ I really enjoyed it!
What's more is that the OC in my own fic's name is also Soojin, which is a neat little coincidence ^^
YomnaExoticGirl
#77
Chapter 45: amazinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnng storrrrrrry :)
really like it ^^ gomawo author-nim *thumbs up *
but it's really ended *sobs* :)))
omgbaek #78
Chapter 45: I SPENT MY ENTIRE AFTERNOON READING THIS OMG. THIS HAS HOW BECAME MY FAVORITE FANFIC
bapthough #79
Chapter 45: I loved loved loved it!!!!!!!!! Thanks for writing this story!
rainn_ #80
Chapter 45: Omg, I have just finished reading this story of yours. I'm not a fan of exo, neither am I an anti, but this story really made me want to meet them. Haha. I love how protective Sehun is to soojin. Haha I wanted to find someone who will take care and love me like Sehun. I can't believe I cried while reading this story. The part when Sehun grandpa died was just so heart breaking. God knows how did you do it. I only had an interaction with him but his death left me bawling. The part that Sehun cried when soojin left him was probably the saddest part of the story. I can't imagine how much he really loves her. And honestly, I think that it's amazing that Sehun is always backing up for soojin. I hoped that you will be able to read this comment of mine and knows how good your story were and how addictive it was ((left me reading this non-stop)) till the end. Many thanks for this story. IT WAS REALLY AMAZING. Xx :-)
nanades #81
Chapter 14: this chapter almost made me cry but I couldn't since I was in the bus otl
it reminds me of my passed greatgrandpa last december and I couldn't even be there during his last breath cos I'm in italy and he was in our hometown (PH). sometimes it frustrates me being in another country even if I was born here when your family is at the other part of the world
Miemela #82
Chapter 45: Done reading it. Such a wonderful story. Great job author nim
imdosbaby
#83
I'm just starting to read it. i'll comment when im done. but after I read the foreword of the story, I find it interesting so far. Lets see the next chapter as I go further from reading.
xxxibgdrgnxx #84
Chapter 45: Kyahhhh love this story alot !!! ><
Shereen_JiaYi #85
Chapter 45: Done reading your story ! Its was really nice and awesome to read ! The ending was sweet and loving . Though i was annoyed by SooJin . Glad i found this story XD Author-nim jjiang !
LeeSooSup #86
Chapter 45: Wow I love your story Authornim! At last happy ending for the both of them :")) even though I always mentally scolding Soojin because of her in denial feelings for Sehun OTL X)
honey_vyntage
#87
Chapter 45: the great story ever ! can believe it I finished this 45 chapters story in one day! ^^
anne4525
#88
Chapter 45: Thanks for a great story!! It was awesome and soo funny!!
jazlynsand
#89
Chapter 45: Finally done reading this story! I am in love with this story. This so kept me so entertained. I really like Soo Jin and Sehun parts in the story. I really recommed everyone to read this. Please contiune to make great stories like rhis one author-nim!
Insoluble
#90
Chapter 45: Beaaaaautifuuuuul! Ughh just amazing! Makes me jump and slap myself because I get all giddy and frustrated the next haha. Seriously I love it!
4everALonE_26 #91
Chapter 45: Finally done reading this story! And guess what? I didn't regret anything because girl! It was Amazinggg and Jjang! /throws a millions of harts

I really like the character of Sehun here also Soo Jin but i feel dissapointed to her sometines coz she's way to stupid lololol. Sehun might kill me for saying that but although it was like that i both love them.♥

Andd yepp you better make a sequeel! >;) ♥
emoTionLessX0x0
#92
Chapter 45: This such a good story author-nim !
syafiqahsyahirah #93
Chapter 45: Btw your story is jjang! *two thumbs up*
syafiqahsyahirah #94
Chapter 45: Author-nim can you make oneshot story about jung ah and jaehyun? ^^
syafiqahsyahirah #95
Chapter 41: Oh no i'm crying right now :'(
syafiqahsyahirah #96
Chapter 38: Omo? Poor sehun :'(
roseheyli #97
Chapter 45: It was nice
I read it in one night I really liked it
But why was she so stupid :))
I mean even if she is first at school she should be a lot smarter when it comes to love as well....
Anyway thank you <3