Chapter 21: nice work captain i appreciate the fluffy scenes so much to the point i have this big urge to barge in to kaisoo making out and just give them two thumbs up
Chapter 21: I'm a very emotional reader. I get mad when things get mad, and I get sad when things get sad. Please don't make me cry. I'm not very attractive when I cry.
Chapter 21: this is gna be weird but I dun even mind if u kill off kaisoo or smth but pls PLS PLS DUN KILL OFF CHEN I WILL CRY he has a promise to lay and he can't break that promise omg
Chapter 21: Omg Omg my heart is beating so fast! Please let everything turn out okay for everyone! They've been through so much already but I feel they still have so much more! Plus Luhan needs to tease Kaisoo!
Chapter 21: This is perfect, they are perfect, I cannot. Their chemistry is just so awonderful, cute, amazing, heartwarming you name it! They just flow so well together and hell, Kyungsoo is so gentle it does things to my kokoro. Can't wait for your next update hun! Hwaiting~
Chapter 21: Omg I'm kinda sad this is coming to an end... Kyungsoo and Jongin are two fluffyball ;A; I love you so much lala, your way of writing is perfect ** I hope you're doing well, fighting! <3
Chapter 21: AHHHHH beautiful! I loved the scene with Minseok in the previous chapter: it adds a lot, I think. (Though I'm worried about some of the dark foreshadowing...) I always re-read the chapter right before a new one is posted, so it's seriously nbd that you had to make some adjustments. Kudos to you for fixing it rather than trying to write around it or something; we don't care, we're here for whatever you throw at us!!
Okay, on to this chapter: Soo singing to Nini <bawls> And I'm still not okay from the fluffy cuteness that is Jongin making the knight chess piece whinny across the board and Soo kinda joining in on his ridiculousness.
I want to tell you how much I appreciate how you write their intimate times. It's so romantic and special and just drown me in the loveliness that is Kaisoo already. I love that Luhan walked in on them, even though it's not like there's time for him to react since, ya know, 'S GOING DOWN NEXT CHAPPIE! Wow, so excited for the of this story!!! Thanks so much for updating it again so quickly. I'm glad your health is doing better (I'm assuming that's the case since you're writing). Still love this fic and love you so much. <333
Chapter 20: I TOTALLY thought that this chapter was missing a scene when I read it the first time, like, hmm, she's describing a lot about him walking around under the deck but it didn't go where I thought it would? Okay, sorry, had to get that out before I go read the next chapter now. YAY!
Chapter 20: THEN CHENLAY OMFG IM SCREAMING YES AUWWWW THATS SO ADORABLE IF HE DOESNT FULFIL HIS PROMISE IM GOING TO CRY
but omg yes welcome back i hope uve been taking very good care of urself thank u for updating OuO
Chapter 20: Thank you so much for updating! Your writing is absolutely incredible, and this story is so beautiful it makes me want to cry honestly. This story is so breathtaking
Chapter 20: Thank you so much for updating!! Omg i've obviously been watching too much cacw because when you mentioned "metal" and "hand" the first thing i thought of was chen having bucky's metal hand as a promise to return to lay
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