Chapter 17: Your story is great but it would be better if you can see the difference between your n you're, his n he's and more. Try to correct it ASAP. Btw, I totally love this. ^_^
Chapter 46: One of the best fic I have ever read. You even separate or announce if there rated M ver. I'm so thankful and you must be the most caring author I have ever met. Thank you so much for the awesome story : )
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