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laffism
#1
Chapter 10: sigh, finally the ending.
i'm really glad that they're not dead or missing limbs, but the things that bother me is... the kung-fu-pow-chicka-pow-boom-boom action taeyeon did to the bishop and bishop's fate. is he daed? missing an arm? tooth? eye?
oh well, maybe its up to my imagination? like you said? haha. my wild imagination.

thank you for not killing anybody :) maybe the blood transfusion thing is for the bishop who lost a lot of blood from the fight with that knife with little calm one :D

fighting :))
kpoprambler #2
Chapter 10: Your medieval era escapade is good. I have no words to described it this is my first time to reach such story. And it is nice to read. Some sentences could be interpret differently or could be even be funny in some instances. But nontheless, this is an interesting read. :)
daniorerio
#3
Chapter 10: sago, sago, sago, woori pinksago. your shots are really good ;u; i'd love to read more pink tapioca stories! haha c:

PS those sample sentences are just hilarious! lmfao "save thy neck and step back before Tiffany goes kung fu master on thee!" xD
MysteriousWizard
#4
super nice story at the 1st chapter eomma :) thank you for accepting my request and mentioning me at the 1st chapter! by the way this profile is not mine. its my brother profile.. i dont know how to create a new profile here at asianfanfics! xD i promise i will read the other chapter tomorrow its already midnight i have a class tomorrow!! goodnyt eomma iloveyou :*
PinkSkyy
#5
Chapter 10: Haha! I love the ended.. Well... Someone died.. But meh~ The bishop's better off dead. lol.. Good job! and whoah! You're in med school? you're so smarttt.... haha!
stephanstarr #6
Chapter 10: OH THANK GOD, NO ONE DIED! AND IT ENDED HAPPILY! :D

Hmm, and now i'm wondering if you'd right an epilogue of some sort, since i think the story needs a really tight closure, lol. Like a few years after the escape, perhaps?

But either way, it's a very nice end to a wonderful story. Still, i'm suggesting an epilogue for the other loose ends, like the bishop's crimes and stuff. :D
orangebearies #7
Chapter 10: throws confetti at the happy ending, and because no one died. hehe!!
apunsky
#8
Chapter 9: asdfghjkl i like this story so much ;_______; can't wait for the ending!! :D
naddelta #9
Chapter 9: -crying- so many crying scenes, so sad, so sad!!
but I really liked the chapter, and the letter from TaeYeon it was so heartbreaking(not sure if it's the right word) but I loved it, I could imagine Tiffany crying so hard at the moment she read it!!

Well Petunia certainly had no choice, but why did her daughter died?? I got a little confused in that part...

I hope they make it!!!(I can't get the image of Taeyeon and Tiffany dying out of my head)
Thank you!!!
laffism
#10
Chapter 9: ugh. sigh. of course i like it.. but the intense is getting worse. i cant breathe normally.

oh, poor nursemaid </3

gasp! knife! could it be the moment when lots of bleeding happen?

thanks :))
orangebearies #11
Chapter 9: OMG!! poor nursemaid petunia. the bishop so evil. how blind is the king? sigh...

this chapter was emotional. I have to retreat..... my taeny heart~
Derpy123
#12
Chapter 9: What a fruitcake of a bishop. Couldn't Taeng tell her father that the assface mistreated her like that or is she too prideful? Would he not care? Smh.
But Taeng you little princess, the woman's daughter was and decapitated. Show some fking pity or sympathy, at least. Jesus fk. But then again, its the way she's raised. Sigh. Petunia you poor lady. Should have chopped off his D.
The only people I feel complete sympathy for as of this moment would be Petunia, her daughter and Tiffany. Poor, poor Tiffany.
OH WAIT SO YOU DID END UP KILLING SOMEONE -LE BIG GASP-
update soon (:
Omg BTW what does squib mean because the only thing I can think about are the squibs in Harry Potter, mainly Argus Filch :')
stephanstarr #13
Chapter 9: Ngl, i teared up a bit while reading the letter. Wow... I mean, wow. It's been so long since I've read something this good. I was actually anticipating for the new chapter the whole day, but I can't hide the fact that I was anxious and nervous for it.

I like it. I like it so much. :)
Derpy123
#14
Chapter 8: The whole Petunia screwing over Taeyeon thing is highly understandable, if that's the case. Her rather shocked action - the snapping of the comb - when Taeng told her is alright; I mean, the people have been raised like that, so its almost a logical reaction, and with the fact that you didn't tell us exactly what happened afterwards leaves enough room for anything to happen. Besides, I'm not sure if she was forced to say anything, but it could have been that she felt a high measure of loyalty towards the king. Maybe her relationship with Taeng isn't that strong. Why am I even speculating about this. Update so I can read more heh. IF TIFFANY DIES ILL BE SO SAD